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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

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UnRes!😳

Okay. I know am VERY LATE as usual.😭
Sholly! I know I unres late and then apologize to you everytime. Per ab kya karrun? Aadat si ho gayi hai.πŸ˜†


Lol, again..its alright. C:
So the part was so damn amazing..! I am so glad that they didn't wasted their time in watching the movies.πŸ˜‰Because what they did instead was much more pleasing to read.πŸ˜ƒ

ahan? πŸ˜†

<font color="#ff0066">'Her hair had come loose and it fell like a curtain around him.'</font>

This is my favourite line from the part.😊
And I liked how Zubair approved of their relation after giving my poor baby a black eye.πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

Is this the second last part of this drabble?😲

Haina? I was shocked too πŸ˜† But all good things must come to an end πŸ˜›

Aliya met with an accident. And now you're planning to write a sad one for me. Does this, by any chance, means that Aliya is gonna die?πŸ˜”
I can see that coming.πŸ₯Ί


maybe,maybe not :P
thank u emaan :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

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Ive to write soo much. Sanika bear with my bakwas. Firstly, its 1 am here and im reading it now. Yes now😳. That day i just reserved the space. And the reason why im reading it now is on page 58πŸ˜‰

I know, I know..poor you :p


Woah, this is dedicated to me? Dekh Shiza, im her potterhead partner.πŸ˜›Jealous?πŸ˜†
you people make me smile :P
Wow! Six years guzar gaye? Woohh! This was so well written. Harry potter movie marathon... wow! Loved it! Movies tou theek se dekhi nahin, chamber of secrets pe tou romance a gayaπŸ˜³πŸ˜›haha, Sanika this was so well written. Brilliant update.


I love you SO SO much❀️Im sure youre going to finish before i go to Hyderabad for eidπŸ˜ƒ
I dnt noe when u r going,but agar aaj nai ja rai tho thik hai :p
And thank u so so much

itni jaldi jaldi update karing, kya speed hai!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š
ye speed sirf tere liye tha πŸ˜† varna 4 mein hi pahucti
Wese romantic updates na Emaan ko dedicate kiya karo.
Usko sad pasand hai na :P
She loves besharam updates. Because im a shareef bachiπŸ˜›hahaha, i love you for this dedication. Aur lo it was dedicated to me , still i didnt res the first spot😭sorry😳


koi na. Vaise isme direct potter ref tha isiliye i dedicated this to u :P
thank you again C:
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Posted: 10 years ago
#Reason1(A)- Hoping for her
How does one deal with pain? Thought zain. How is grief dealt with? Are the the same or are they different?
Because he seemed to be going through a plethora of emotions he did not know he could experience.
He just wanted to be safe in her arms. And to make sure that she stays safe.
He wished he had expressed his love one more time.
Kissed her again.
Wished that he had yearned to feel the warmth of her arms just one more time.
And had acted on it.
Wished he could inhale her citrusy scent once again.
He wanted to cry but the tears refused to come out.
He wanted to scream but he was unable to make a noise.
He wanted to talk but he couldn't find the words. He felt nothing.
Pain.
You just have to wait for it to go out.
Hope it goes away on its own.
Hope the wound that caused it heals.
There is no remedy.
No solutions.
You just breathe deep and hope it goes away on its own.
Or hope that wound that caused it heals.
And Zain Abdullah,a 24 year old CA, hoped that wound would go away.
Hoped that everthing would be alright.
Hoped against hope that she would be fine.
"She promised." He said,looking towards the ceiling, his eyes bloodshot.
"She promised she will be with me always. If you break it Aliya,I will hate you forever."
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cause I am nt ready to end it yet :P
Ab go through the drill phir se. Like nd comment ppl! Bhul gaye kya.
emaan. Ye le sad sad tere liye c:
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unress.
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Reason 1-B He loves her.
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Aliya opened her eyes to a
suffocating white that was the hospital celing.
Her head seems to have burst because it was hurting so much.
Her arms ached,she had a terrible headache, her legs-
She panicked. Her legs.
She tried to sit up but in vain. Her arms were hooked to a millions hooks. Her forearms were dressed in white gauze.
"What happened?" She wondered as she drifted off to an uneasy med induced slumber.
The next time she opened her eyes,she was met with a much more favourable sight.
Him.
She sighed. But her angel looked so tired. She thought.
Bloodshot eyes, dark circles, shoddy clothes, messed hair, unshaven face.
She half wondered if he smelt.
She giggled at that thought.
Zain woke up from his deep thought when he heard her giggling.
His eyes shot up to her face, relief flooding his heart.
She was awake.
He quickly shot a thanks to Allah.
"Zain" she croaked. Her throat felt dry. Parched.
He understood her without her saying anything.
He filled a glass and helped her sit up.
That is when she realised her legs were gauzed up. Like she had a fracture.
And above all, she couldnt feel them.
Her eyes pooled up as panic made way into her senses.
Alarmed, Zain asked- "Aliya, what happened? Is it paining? Should I call a doctor?"
"Zai-" her voice broke.
"Zain" she tried again.
"I- I can-cant" she gasped.
"You can't what Aliya? "
"My-my legs."
His hands itched towards the call button,concern and confusion shining in his expression.
"I can't feel them" she said.
"Oh" he muttered.
"Zain-"
"Its ok Aliya. Nothing's wrong with your legs. They have numbed it cause-"
"What happened?" She croaked again.
"How much do you remember?"
"Uh- I left home after you left for office- I uh,was on my scooty-oh"
"Couldn't you drive more carefully! Aliya how careless could you be? You jumped a light! f**k Aliya! Why? What was so urgent?! I could have lost you you know?" He cupped her face, his voice rising each octave.
"Zain..shhh"
"What shhh? You never listen to me. Told you to take the car. No. When do you ever listen to me? No,you had to take your scooty. How crass Aliya. If the same had happened to me,you would have killed me no? I hate you Aliya."
He said, fighting back a sob.
"Aah, Ms Haider. You are awake. Do you feel your legs?"
"No" she panicked again.
"Good. Good. We have numbed it because your legs have second degree burns. Your engine had combusted. So for now, you have to do without feeling in them." The doctor said, inserting some liquid in the drip.
Second degree burns. That meant scars
She brushed back her hair when she saw it on her hand.
The doctor left when she asked-
"What's this?" holding up her finger on which sat a sapphire stoned ring.
"Oh that" zain replied, his voice level.
"That is our engagement ring. We are getting married."
"What?" She shouted, but her shout did not have any effect on him.
"Yeah. We are getting married. Haven't fixed the dates though" he rambled, making her drink water.
She gulped the entire glass in two large gulps.
"Obviously it has to be after you have recovered. Because-"
"ZAIN" she shouted, this time effectivley shutting her up.
"I know my name darling. No need to shout it. We are not having-"
"Zain" she said exasperated this time.
He managed a tired smile.
"Btw with who's permission are you marrying me? You have to ask me first no? So where's my proposal?"
"The rains ruined it. You are not getting any. You are getting married to me. Your parents and Zubair approve. My parents can go to hell."
"Ok, so let me get this straight. You are marrying me. Without my permission?" She wet her lips.
"Yeah. Cause you have a bad habit of running away from me. So yes. You are marrying me. It is not an option for you. Your opinions can stay where it is. Cause I know you won't say no. You are ready right? I know it is a big step. But six years is more than enough for me. I wanna be yours Aliya. And have children with you. And grow old with you. You are willing right? You will not say no right? Aliya?"
He asked, his voice changing from confident to desperate.
She smiled but it did not quite reach her eyes.
But he noticed.
"What happened? You want to wait? Or you don-"
"Zain" she wisphered,tears in her eyes.
She took his hands in hers.
"Do you really want to marry me?"
"What kind of stupid question is that?" He asked,siiting on her bed.
"I mean will you marry me because-" her voice broke.
"Aliya?" He asked, concerned.
"I am scarred after all."
His eyes grew soft and his voice softer-" I don't care. At all. Trust me."
"But Zain-"
"Shush. I am in love with you. You really think I would care?"
"But Zain-"
"Aliya," he said,shifting his posture so that he too was half sitting-half lying near her.
"I don't care. I fell in love. You made me fall in love. Now when I want to grow old with you and have seven kids with you and read books with you and eat chocolates with you- you are backing off? That would be cheating Aliya, you would be cheating on your life. My life."
"Why do you love me?" Her voice raspy again.
"Because- because" Zain tried, his hands busy in making motions of the words he could not speak.
"I just do.! That should be reason enough"
He stroked her hair and placed a kiss on her forehead.
"I wanna know" she said admantly.
He sighed.
"Because you are the most irritating person on this planet."
She raised one eyebrow.
He rolled his eyes.
"You are the only one who can make me jealous or overprotective. The one who can make me smile despite myself. "
He rambled.
"The one who puts me in line. You-you are-"
He struggled,sighed and tried again.
"You are like a puzzle to me. Waiting to be solved. I want to solve you Aliya. And a lifetime seems so little for me to do that.
I love you soo much that I can't even say a no to you. You have always been there for me Aliya. You gave me a family. You made me believe again. Now you cant back off. You can't leave me. And that too because of no reason."
She smiled weakly, the drugs kicking in.
Her eyes drooped.
"Go to sleep." He said softly.
"We will talk about this later."
He kissed her nose and made her lie down properly before lying next to her.
"Zain." She muttered.
"Hmm?" He said, hugging her carefully.
"I am not giving birth to seven kids. Be satisfied with one or two."
And she drifted off to sleep.
He smiled and spoke in her ear.
"We will see Haider."
She smiled in her sleep.
"I love you Haider. I love you very much"
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Khatam? The whole series is finished. Never have I updated this fast.
Emaani, yup this is also for you.
So, like and comment people.
It will take only two minutes.
Your critisism is always welcome as long as it is constructive.
So yeah. go review.
Loads of love
-Sanika.
Edited by arshipotterfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss!

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Finally this weekend I'm a bit free. That's why unressing everywhere πŸ˜›
You know you're one of the best writers on this forum. Your writing style is really different ⭐️ And i love whatever you write, be it funny or sad , seriously Sanikaa woww! πŸ‘
These lines are awesome :
He wanted to cry but the tears refused to come out.
He wanted to scream but he was unable to make a noise.
He wanted to talk but he couldn't find the words. He felt nothing.

Man brilliant update!! Arey he is a Chartered Accountant ? πŸ˜› wow!

Beautifulll ❀️ Keep it up!! Sanika awesomee!! πŸ‘πŸΌ

This is a combined comment for both the parts πŸ˜‰

Thank you fr updating it so fast πŸ˜†
Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Looks like is drabble ke two pagal readers are sleeping.

Allah ka shukar hai. Dekho thread pe Kitna Sukoon hai πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow lovely update
Loved it
Very beautifully written
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res! πŸ˜ƒ

UnRes!

Abhi kuch aur kerne ke liye hai nahi na toh socha comment abhi hi ker doon. πŸ˜†
Mere liye itna chota part? 😲 I hate you!! 😑

It was a nysh part. Zain's state was described beautifully.

"She promised she will be with me always. If you break it Aliya,I will hate you forever."

Awww ... my babby. 😭
I just know Aliya would be fine. She will survive. She will stay with him. I just know. 😳

You don't want to end it? πŸ˜ƒ
How about changing the title from 'ten things' to '20 things' ? Great idea na? πŸ˜†

Btw why have you reserved the spot below the update?
Edited by Emaani.95 - 10 years ago
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Shiza all spots goneee 🀣

Emaan i thought you won't come only πŸ˜› Btw, that spot is for reason 10(B).. pehla wala is 10(A)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Shiza all spots goneee 🀣

Emaan i thought you won't come only πŸ˜› Btw, that spot is for reason 10(B).. pehla wala is 10(A)


Yeh drabble update ho or main na aaun? Ho hi nahi sakta. πŸ˜›
Ohh it's for the second half. So does this mean the second half part is also for me Sanika?
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