Originally posted by: simran422
Oh. My zain i feel so bad for him. It was such an emotional update. Loved it cont. Soon
Originally posted by: AshesToDust
awesome... so when do we have Aliya in the update?
and wow to the last lines where you called denial that...lolupdate soon!
Originally posted by: Emaani.95
Res😎
Will unres later.😳UnRes!😳I loved reading Zain's feelings. How he lived his childhood. :( I am hating his parents. :/ They ignored their son cuz they were too busy in their own life.🤔
People do that you know... they get married nd after a while the love seems lost between them..nd their marriage feels nothing but a burdern to them... nd the poor children suffer." His mother's kisses became 500-ruppee notes, hisfather's pat on his back became a new cycle, and ashe grew up, a bike. "You wrote the changes in his life beautifully yaar. Too good!👏
Thank you sooi much...I loved this line! ❤️' he was not anyone's priority. He longed to be someone's. '
Aliya ka hoga na...:PIt was a very nice part. No kissing scene!?😒Chalo koi baat nahi.😛
Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
Next mein pukka :) though i haven't started writing :P I know you'll not disappoint me. 😛😆
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Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
that is one unique name.. i wish i had one😛😛 Hahaha! Ab jo hai , usi se kaam chala lou 😆
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