ZaYa SS: Busted (Chapter 6, Page 11, Aug 22) [Complete] - Page 3

javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome start

Wow this is a wonderful story.

Looking forward to read it.

Eager to know who caught Aliya and Zain in his room.

Their conversation is funny. I love their cute and lovely character. Thank goodness barkat isn't a villain.

Update next chapter soon

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kunakshafan26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

aww soo lovely awesome plsss update soonand send me a pm too for the next part plss😳

Edited by kunakshafan26 - 10 years ago

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

omg omg i love this
u are a very talented writer
nut a favour please. i can read hindi but i prefer english so could u translate into english fter writing them?
continue soon :)

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ZayaHarshika

@ZayaHarshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

OMG
That was one heck of a peice...
Amazing that was
Keep writing..
Soo luking frwd to this

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Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hey, thanks for the PM :)

Great start! Sounds really interesting...do update soon!

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Aww so cute i always wanted to read a ff with zaya already in love before they married n interacting behind the family's back lol, update soon

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Ms.Bholi_Bhaali

@Ms.Bholi_Bhaali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

omg !!! u r such a fab writter dear 😛

i really luvd it

do continue soon nd pm karna math bhoolna

ohhh nd asha as barkath,correct role for miss negi 😳

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Awesome awesome awesome loved it to the core😳

Awww cute update and both are. Cutie pie's😉 ,

Ur Barkat is too sweet, I'm happy u selected her😉

Do update soon😛, and pm me if possible

Thanks for such a nice update💔👍🏼

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day_lily

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Amazing!!! They r in love with each other already...really xcited to read more...

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ilovesarunarshi

@ilovesarunarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

plz update. It was awesome

👏

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