ZaYa SS: Busted (Chapter 6, Page 11, Aug 22) [Complete] - Page 2

ava23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I always squeal with delight when I get a pm from you coz I know whatever you have written will b amazing.. I like the way u show little flashbacks and u definately have a wit going on.. U just made my day thank you 😃🤗

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vinu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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i'm sure of having diabetes soon!

u write such sweet cute ones!

Asha as bakbak! what a relief.. i can totally imagine how cute n bubbly she will look with HarshIka😃

the opening was such a ROFL riot... just loved it

their tu tu main main doesn't ever end! not that i'm complaining 😉😆

i wonder how they managed to hide from all the KMHs! and zain used to visit bhopal every now n then??? deewaana hogaya yeh toh! and magarmach jaise aasoon!🤣🤣 that was so funny!

Zee n Gauhar! lolz.. those 2 cartoons get ZaYa jealous.. i really loved the way u hav shown their realisation aboutthe jealousy and then Pyaar-vyaar. filmy much?😛😉

in all , this was indeed a laugh+cuteness galore.. loved it as much as i love u😳❤️

will be waiting for the next part😃

Edited by vinu127 - 10 years ago

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