ZaYa SS: Busted (Chapter 6, Page 11, Aug 22) [Complete] - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
*woots*
finally CF is here
ya i know dayan has been spamming na😆😆but i noe how much you love it😉😛
and about the NL, i would not let you miss it any cost!
so back to Busted!
you know right, because i cannot quote every thing, will refer in order
as cheesy as it may sound, i like such moments cozy moments more than hot ones...God knows why!
kinna despo hai Zain😆😆😆 he just wants her by his side no matter what or why!😛😛😛
and Aliya!🤣Mostunrealistic situations ha??
waise kaunsi bag hai iski joh itna bada hai ki usme Zain fit hojaye? batau yaar main bhi kharid lungi!😆and tum itni patli ho! how can you even pull that bag, forget carrying it!
and there it comes! KIDNAP! Zain are you even for real! abb lo next teli jail hogi hospital me!😛
but on a more serious note, i really love how these 2 crave for each other... they so really wanna spend quality time together but Hell these KMHs!
and frenimies-cool word ha😎 gonna use in some of my story now!😉..erm..if u don't mind😛
but i liked that line.. her realising the depth of their relation or should i say, relishing and reassuring it?!
and then that Kiss!the way you explained every thing slowly... i mean painstakingly slowly! i'm out of breath! uff! i'm hyperventilating!
i had goosebumps when he whisperd you know?..well i always do when he whispers☺️
and your story and my imagination of Zain Blew me out of not just water but of of everything in this God damn huge world!
ans suspense ha??? lemme guess
Person 1-suri/shabana
Person 2-Usman/ghulam
Person 3-shabana/suri
Person 4-aayat
Person 5-Riz
the first 3, i'm pretty confused.. though i am more confident about the ones i've typed first
kyunki these are the only ones who could have such talks..bakbak toh aise karegi nahi, nafeesa will be in her own dream world
and the next 2 i'm more confident than the 1st 3 though my only doubt is if they could be FahEsa! but i'm 85% percent sure its RizYat
and the convo was hilarious.. about the 4 Unknowns(out of which 2 are are known to us)
and bechare Fahad and Zain! shopping! at times i myself hate it!
if the shopping is not for me , then ven more and bechara zain! woh toh kitna armaan sajaake baitha tha! par dekho na! kya ho gaya!poor baby*pulls his cheeks*
and God! really 10 sherwanis! and 10 more!
oh god! and his sherwani holder😆😆😆
and how cheesy! he buys everything that she likes!
and aliya toh inhe pakadwakehi rahegi! stay in character aliya!😛😛😛
but this fellow! romance ka koi mauka nahi chodata. trial room! oh Zain so despo???
wah yaar!
and aliya bhi na! chilla rahi thi like an idiot! enjoy the moment bab! it ZUA in front of u!
and well u noe, u've used my fa dialogue of "You" here.. though there are many other ways, thats the one he likes!😉😉
and i just don't mind zain being full of himself! not his mistake yaar! he is full of me also!
annnddd... BUSTED! Barkat catches him red handed... ok... Lipgloss lipped!😛
tamatar ban gaya hoga!🤣🤣🤣
and aliya☺️
sorry but can't help but quote this

Oh hello mother, lipstick you say? Well that may be Aaliya's from when I kissed her back in the dressing room. Why am I kissing her you ask? Well I would like to tell you that I am in love with this girl and have been for a while now, TADA! So when's the nikaah?

sarcasm ki hadd hoti hai Zain! this one made me fall off my bed!
and then! the accident! i'm not at all upset! not one bit bothered!
Zainu met with an accident
nope i'm not mad!
but i trust you
awesom blossom hospital romance coming our way!🥳

Thanks a Ton CF for such a lovely chapter
and u noe, i'll not repeat the same "mindblowing, awesome, super good, amazing" and all that again and again
the only thing i will say is

ILU and u noe it❤️🤗
bye.. waiting for the next part..
till then me n my dayan will continue😆😆😆

🤗
-Vinu❤️
Edited by vinu127 - 10 years ago
jazmeen thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing
Loved dressing room busted by own sis scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update.loving the secret romance.continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly congrats dear🥳
What an update simply amazing 😃
Jus jus loved it to the core
Great writing skills👏
Thank u.so much for pm and long long update🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the PM :) am really enjoying this story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Am in love with your work...its damn interesting..and dialogues...they just cracked me up ..and i am predicting that person 4 & 5 is nafeesa and fahad...1&2 probably suraiya and Usman...3 ..shabana?...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...do continue👏
Cant wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it😊
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Update soon and PM me😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
very interesting...
thx fr the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohhh nooo zain hit 😭
but lovely update i must say 👏
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