ZaYa SS: Busted (Chapter 6, Page 11, Aug 22) [Complete] - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
ressie firstie..i have been w8ing..this looks like a dream..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
omg...i m first..dekh buttercup..i m first with my cupcake..woohoo..!!
Very bad cupcake..u made me w8..!!
but m sure this vil b awesome..*hugs*πŸ€—
i m unressing at late night...guests came..whhat a wrong timing..!!😑
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Bless my mom to send the guests away..!!
Unres..!!
Pehle to sharafat se assalam alaikum..!πŸ˜ƒ
n what did u write in ur pm..u can read if u r interested..v all have been dying to read it cupcake..ofcourse v r interested..!!
Ok..so now coming to the SS...
Umm...*coughmecough*..uh..yah..i have been torchuring u lately..but i m born Dayan..i do that to special people cupcake..and u are a very special one..!!πŸ˜ƒI wont say ki i m stopping to do it..
I will continue to cum here everyday..!!Because i love u and ur SS..
Again..cuming back to the SS...πŸ˜›
"Tum mere bag mein chupke Bhopal chalna."
Don't say that aliya...vo aa sakta hai..!!πŸ˜›
Mein tumhe kal kidnap kar raha hoon
Kar le zainie pie kar le...
"Jabse tum yaha aaye ho." He sighed. "Sab tumhe chura letai hai, kabhi mom, kabhi Barkat aur phir tum saara din busy rehti ho aur mere saath kitkit bhi nahi karti."
Hayyy..cupcake..i m in love with this man yet again..thnx to u..!!πŸ€ͺHe is amazing yaar..and so are u..!πŸ€—
"You are so beautiful." He whispered caressing my cheeks with his fingers as my eyes closed on their own accord. He slowly, and I mean painstakingly slowly, moved his fingers around my face, almost ghosting over my skin, up to my forehead, my temples and then working his way over my eyelids ...
GOD..!!The very first "You a so beautiful" gave me goosebumps..!!
And then to kya haal batau apna...πŸ€ͺ
then stopping in the middle as he stared at them.
OMG..!!again u r conspiring to kill me cupcake..!! *pouts*
Zain deepened the kiss increasing the pressure of his mouth. I let out a small moan as his tongue traced my bottom lip. He took advantage of the situation and invaded my mouth, his tongue meeting mine fighting a battle that we both didn't care to win.
This is not good for me as i m just 14...but i don't CARE..!!!HAYYY...!!!!
I m actually breathing with my mouth now...!!WOW..!!!Aapke charan chho rahi hu me...u write sooo..kya bolu...stunning ki my awesome AC stops working seeing the hotness in ur work...!!πŸ€ͺ
"Blew them out of the water."
Me too me too zainie pie...fark itna hai ki i m out of oxygen now..n this blew my mind...Vinu doctor..u need to treat me now...!!Cupcake is making me go mad..no no Gaga over her SS..!!πŸ˜†

Now cuming to the persons and their talk...
I think Person 1 is Suraiyya(as she is female)
Person two could be Usman
Person three could be Shabana😲
Person four is Ayat
Person five is Rizwan😳(And these two..Ayat and Riz are in a relationship)πŸ˜ƒ
Sorry if i m right and ruined ur surprise...i can be very intelligent at time u know??
Cho cholly..*does sit ups*

Waapas cuming to the story...
I looked at Zain who was now staring into his bowl of cereal like it was the most interesting thing in the world.
Bachke aliya...iraade theek nahi lag rahe hai..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
Humari family ne milke mere kidnapping plan ki hatya kardi
ROFL...!!Bechara zainie pie..!!Wanna pull his cheeks..!!
I don't understand how a woman could be so sexy in such normal clothing but Aaliya just was.
Ufff...ur dialogues kill me Cupcake..!!πŸ€ͺ
Seriously. STOP TALKING WOMAN.
Exactly aliya😑ENJOY..!!!
"Tum bahut zyada bolti ho." I smirked. "Now listen, yaha pai apna bag bhool jaana, aur ghar jaakar jab tumhe yaad aayega toh mein tumhe yaha waapis lekar aaonga aur car kharabhojayge."
Waah zain miyah...kya order diya hai..!!Keep it up..sau putr bhava..!!😳
Must be my kissing expertise. Sometimes I am full of myself, sue me
🀣n no sueing u zain..i love u..!!😳
Oh hello mother, lipstick you say? Well that may be Aaliya's from when I kissed her back in the dressing room. Why am I kissing her you ask? Well I would like to tell you that I am in love with this girl and have been for a while now, TADA! So when's the nikaah?
OMG..!!!This man is too good for words..Sarcasm zindabad..!!🀣🀣🀣
I am total gentleman.
Yeah right..gentlemen kiss in changing room huh..?!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Now coming to the last part...what happened to my zainu..??Read it the second time and got to know..so he is hit by a car...??
😭😭Hope he will be okay..!!Don't worry jaan...aliya is there for u...!!Ab to romance ke chances badh gaye hai Zain...khush ho jaa..Baba Cupcake ne teri sun li..!!πŸ˜›

But thoroughly enjoyed it..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ‘
Thank u soo much for this Cupcake..!!U mad my night..!!πŸ€—
Now i m off to read it again..!!

Love u more than ever..!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lots of hugs..!!πŸ€—πŸ€—
-ShizπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by ZayaShiz - 10 years ago
simran422 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wohooo! Awesome update once again!
As i always say you're damn good at writing.. loved itt
eagerly waiting for the next update.. phillsss update soon if possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazinnnggg update!!!πŸ‘
So beautifully writtenπŸ‘πŸΌ
loved it ❀️
Ty so much for PM dearπŸ€—
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
such a cute update
oh no Zain got hit by a car
but that means more romantic scenes coming up
can't wait
Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm update
Loved it
Very sweet and cute
Oh no has zain got hit by a car 😭
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Egarly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nahiii! Bechara zain 😭 btw lovely update! Aww the kiss 😳 plz plz plz plz update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres.
my reaction throughout the update
"Awww awww awww"
When the person-talk came... i couldnt understand at first..
"Whhhat?" Was my reaction...i had to read it twice πŸ˜†
The dressing room scene was all awww and is it getting hot in here for me πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
Do you have to make your hero go through physical pain everytime..?
last ts mein bhi zain ka accident..
but over and all...amazing as always..thanks for the pm 😳 πŸ˜› 😊
Edited by arshipotterfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updates i really like it
continue soon and plz pm me πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love our updates as always ...and kisses every scene between them was like awesome ...just update soon
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