ZaYa SS: Busted (Chapter 6, Page 11, Aug 22) [Complete] - Page 10

Wow ! Wow! Wow! This is brillianttt!! 👏 You're seriously one of the best writers I've come across 😃 Hahahaha! I loved the last part ! This update was way too awesome! Dude this is amazinggg! 😊 Thanks for the pm! You've a natural talent of writing ;) Keep it up! I really love all your works on ZaYa 😳

Are u planing to kill me with your updates

" Like I was normally hot, no matter what I wore, but Mamu Ki Bhanji lost her mind when I dressed up nicely, she definitely liked me in shirts and ties, but who can blame her?" - best bit
love ur updates
u're so good at the humour writing

Super cute 😳
Thanx for the pm
Waiting for d next part 😃

Lovely part

That was so cute 😳

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

res!!!!omg..i m first!!!!!luv u di

unres!!

O.M.G!!!wat did i just read😲??

u know i luv u di...but that doesnt mean shud kill me?!!!😭

WAt an update!!!!!!!!!AWSEOME!!!SUPER SE UPARRR!!!

jealous zain!!!OMG!!that was stunning work by u(as usual)😳

N zain k friends r mentioned?? wow!! i luved dat part

Zain ka POV!!!! KYA KAHU??? i mm speechless!! so like our zain!!!😳

if i start describing my haalat at d moment den i vil finish 2 pages wid my comments only..

I said wrapping my arms around her waist, my hands resting on her bare stomach causing her to gasp. Damn, her skin was soft. I dragged my hands across her stomach, slowly, I felt her shiver in my arms and the goosebumps under my hand. I love how reactive she is to my touch

*🤪dead*

"Miyah, aap kisko ghoor ghoor kar dekh rahe hai?" Shit. Busted. I turned to my right to see my dad and Aaliya's dad staring at me smiling..🤣🤣

Mein...kisiko nahi. Actually, sab mujhe ghoor ghoor kar dekhthai hai." I smirked causing the two of them to laugh. "Mein toh sab se baach kar reh-raha hoon, nahi toh saari raat mujhse tarah tarah ke sawal pooche jayenge."😲🤣

The Zain in my head, aka my alter ego, was jumping around and standing in front of Aaliya yelling "MINE" but I sadly couldn't do that and was forced to introduce her to my friends knowing that they would spend all night following her and asking her questions if I didn't.😳

hayyy..sacchi???

i luv dis possessive one!!

It wasn't pretty but I got confused with the whole under and over thing, hey, don't judge me! There are some things that even Zain Abdullah can't do, shocking, I know

@bold..this is my zain!!!🤣

Zain's feelings!!🤣

n d butter jealousy part..!!OMG!!!🤣

I cant luv u more than this..or can i di??becoz i have gone crazy wid ur writing skills...i need to consult a doctor now..🤪

d vanilla fragrance concept in d SS always skips my heart a bit!!!!😳

Aww..i m having goosebumps now!!!

So maybe this is how d whole family got to know abt their affair i think..!!😲zain needs to control!!😳

God!!i can comment on EACH AND EVERY LINE..I SWEAR!!!🤪

but a small confusion..aliya to phas gayi lagta hai means it seema aliya is caught wid d aunties na??or is it dat she has been found??i m being too onservant i think😛

Nevertheless...dis was worth d wait👏

I wanted to read it slowly so that it doesnt end soon..😛

but it did!!??!! why god??!!! kyu??!!😭😭

but i vil b eagerly waiing for ur next update..n i donno how i m gonna survive till then..!!

N yes..I LUV U DI !!!!😃!!!!🤗

(rushes to read it again)😳n i vil keep doing dis until ur next update..😃(this is my biggest review given to ANY1 till date😆😃😳)

-LOADS OF LUV N HUGS!!

-Shiz😃

ahh this chapter was lovely! You write so so well, esp when it comes to romance and humour! too good! :) Waiting for the next update :)

Originally posted by: vinu127

sab se pehle.. what do you even intend to do CF?

kill me?

or make me drool over zain without blinking?

or burn my brain imagining ZaYa?

i just don't get ur intensions!

Zalim ho aap! sacchi! *pouts*

first of all u give such cute long updates and that has the hotness quotient too

buti will not change ur name.. u r Candy floss urf CF only😛

now coming to the chapter.. i so want to quote the entire chapter but will look too odd! so i'll just refer in order

Uff! the way zain admires his MKB.. i so admire that... but his ego petting goes on na.. that he is hot too.. but itna hot hai toh utna build up banta hai😉😳

totally latoo he is over her!

i care less about the vanilla perfume but u are making me go crazy for sure

isss...that was HOT!

and i love bakbak yaar... cho cute she is😳😳😳

and the tie part was also cute, hot, romantic all at the same time!

ur srsly killing me

that was a master piece.. esp the @purple part🤣

and iss baar! Fahad bana KMH! abb yahi bacha tha

poor fahad and zain.. gotta bear the gossip queens!😵

and ha.. the jealous, posessive Zain! oh my i love him!

i thought shawn would defo have a broken nose😆😆😆

i enjoyed nafeesa and aliya's convo too.. cho cute

and mumma's boy ha zain? oye hoye.. accha i'll zip my mouth.. u have a reputation tohandle after all😛

ZAIN!!!!🤣🤣 OMG this fellow!

lovely chapter CF

about the writing, i'm tired of saying the same old thing...

the only old thing i will tell is

ILU and u noe it

bye

waiting for the next update

-vinu

awww again sooo cute sorry for the late reply even i was busy for wedding preparations for my sister
but very very cute 😳
pls update soon nd thanks for the pm