The man, the nephew and the grandson-Arjuna's future(Pg 10-part 10)

Yajnaseni thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

I am a newbie in India-forums and this is my first fan fiction. So I hope that this becomes a success. This fan-fic is set in post-war time. I always wondered how Vrishketu ultimately became close to his uncle who was also caused his father's death.This is a story about Arjuna and Vrishaketu as well as Arjun and Parikshit .I hope you shall like it. Your comments will be very much appreciated.


The greatest war of the ages was over. Millions had died. The older ones had lost their zest for life after cremating their younger ones. The younger ones had lost the shelter and protection of the adults. Many women after losing their father, brothers and sons had gone sati after their husbands. Those who had survived the war had forgotten to live. Silence loomed everywhere. the eyes saw sorrow, the heart felt pain, food tasted bitter. Only sobs could be heard, nothing could be said.

Yet in the looming darkness there was a ray of hope. Yudhistira had been crowned the Emperor. Yudhistira was the very dharma incarnate, never speaking untruth, never doing injustice, calm and rational even in the face of death. Surely, he will nurture the Kingdom back to prosperity. Surely with time wounds would healto leave only a few scars.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

A man was sitting alone in the lap of nature-at the bank of river Ganga leaning against a rock. This was the only place where he found solace. The war had snatched away his progeny only to leave a deep void in his heart. Their side had won the war.The humiliation of his family had been avenged His brother was the Emperor and his wife was his Empress. But Arjuna felt that he had fallen in a pit from where he could never rise. He felt no zest for life, no source of happiness except when he was around his Grandon Parikshit. He could not watch his sons grow up. He would enjoy the delights of fatherhood in his grand-fatherhood. He would teach the child to walk, to fight, to sing, to dance, anything that was in his power to share. When he grew up, he would be a great King, a beloved King.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

A few months ago, the house had eleven boys running all over the house. They created so much hustle-bustle that their grandmother had no time to rest running after them and catering to the many demands of stories, kheer, laddu, etc. Adhirath and Radha were very proud grandparents. This cottage was now abnormally silent. All the boys had ascended to the abode of God along with their father. Their mother decided to follow them. Only Vrishaketu, the youngest was left tp bear the heart wrenching pain of losing near and dear ones. He had been too young to have participated in the war. He wanted to. If he had been allowed he would have been happy to be with his family also. All his brothers had died a chivalrous death, so had his father. His mothers had gone sati after him. He was now left in the custody of his grandparents, the only family he had now. The Prince of Anga barely ate, slept even less. His nights were filled with horrible dreams- blood drenched bodies surrounded by Eagles and Jackals, his mother as she was enveloped by fire and many more.

Of all the places in the massive city, there was only one place he liked to be- at the bank of the Ganga River. There were numerous memories that were attached to it. Memories, he thought, was the only thing he was left with. His father used to come here every morning to pray to the Sun God. Many times he and his brothers used to come there along with his brothers and while he gave charity to the needy, they used to play around. Then their father used to teach them about the different formations, battle strategies and weaponry. While on the bank Vrishaketu used to lose himself in the memories. Memories were the only thing that were alive for him.

Edited by Yajnaseni - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

88

Views

32.1k

Users

25

Likes

224

Frequent Posters

..KarnaKriti.. thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Wow!👏 This is great!
Continue soon and PM when you do update next 😃
meghnakundu thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Wow u ri8 really good pls pm me d next time u update
sayee thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
it's good one for a start...BTW it's Parikshit not Purochan
Medha.S thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Nice -- But the grandson was King Parikshit --- Purochan was trhe guy who made the lac house where the Duryo and Co. planned to burn the Pandavas.

Parikshit was Abhimanyus son -- he was named the same by Krishna. 😊
Yajnaseni thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sayee

it's good one for a start...BTW it's Parikshit not Purochan


Sry, I just messed up a bit. Thanks fr correcting me.
Edited by Yajnaseni - 10 years ago
InkAndFable thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Nice story...
Plez continue sooon nd pm me wen u udate...
Patrarekha thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
plz continue i always wanted to read on Arjun-Vrishketu
Yajnaseni thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Part-2

The sun was to set. The work for the day had stopped. The birds had started returning to their nests. Silence fell all around. As a mild breeze blew, Arjuna felt more at peace. Somehow, the burden of spilt blood that he had been carrying began to reduce. Brighter memories of years that had gone by began to play in his mind. He saw Abhimanyu as a child, body full of energy and mind full of mischief. Though he was the second youngest in the family, only elder to Srutkarma, he was the already chosen leader of the gang of young lads. They would steal Bhima's ladoos from the kitchen and distribute them among all their friends. They would go on hiding the precious jewels of Nakula, horrifying the young maidens by their tricks, hunting rabbits with their knives and whatever suited their fancy at whatever time. Abhimanyu was always the mastermind of their plans and somehow he also coerced Prativindhya to join them. Arjuna's youngest son Srutakarma was shyer but always followed his brother's footsteps. Arjuna fondly remembered the lullaby he used to sing to the two boys to make them fall asleep. He began to sing the same lullaby. Arjuna was so engrossed in the memory of the sweet song that he did not notice the young boy who was sitting a few paces away from him and seemed to be totally engrossed by Arjuna's melody.

Vrishaketu was watching the setting Sun. His mind was hollow and his soul was a ball of agony. The breeze was gently caressing the boy like a doting mother. It was then a male voice started to sing. It was a lullaby. He had never heard anything so melodious, so touching, so soothing. Soon he was engrossed by the song and all his rage, his confusion, his sorrow started fading away. The song had strung a cord in his heart. He was sobbing. Giving expression to his vent up pain made him feel a lot lighter. The song seemed to be eternal, from another world. Vrishaketu felt as if his father was talking to him with a voice full of love. Then suddenly the song stopped. Vrishaketu looked around to find that the singer was retreating back to his home. He tried to follow the singer but to no avail. The man had very long strides and Vrishaketu couldn't catch up with him. So he watched the outline of the man fade in the dark. Somehow the figure looked unnaturally familiar to Vrishaketu. He ran back home with the melody still ringing in his ear. Sleep crept over him easily that night.

meghnakundu thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Woww...it was awesome..u clearly showed d emotions of Arjuna and vrikshetu...beautifully written...:)))...pls continue soon and thnx fr d pm...😊
Edited by meghnakundu - 10 years ago
Top