Zaya TS:Dooriyan chap 2 pg 6,9 july - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Eagerly waiting for this.. please update soon..I have a good feeling about this :-) I'm gonna love this..I can yell from the prologue :-) can't wait... Sooo exited:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Interesting concept!
Eagerly waiting to read it
Do PM me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Really awesome prologue dear.
Please update soon.
And do pm me when u do so.
Thank you so much for the pm.
Thanks a lot. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
I will be waiting and do pm meπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by craziness05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1


The court had declared Zubair as innocent a week ago.Aliya was happy because her cousin brother was not guilty.
However what came crashing upon her as well as zain was that he was the actual culprit.He damaged the chain of the lift to harm Osman.To take revenge for his insult.
He ran away the same day he was declared as innocent.

Aliya hated herself.Only if she knew that he did this...she herself wud hv put him behind the bars.Just because of her the culprit escaped.Aliya felt guilty,she was ashamed that just because of her the man who harmed her mamu was able to run away.

Suraiya already hated aliya.This incident gave her one more reason to hate aliya.But this time she was not alone.
She brainwashed zain everyday abt how aliya cheated on him and how she was with zubair in his plan.

Zain too started believing her...uski beintehaa mohabbat beintehaa nafrat me badal ne lagi.
How?how could she do this to him?

That night he was drunk.aliya was sitting near the window just when he came in.
His eyes were red...he was furious..this was frightening aliya.
Zain stumbled but got back on his feet.
He grabbed aliyas hand.
Zain:sharam nhi ayi...mje or meri family ko dhoka de ke...mere dad ki ye halat kr di tumne...mili hui thi na tum us zubbu se.
I hate u aliya...i hate u.
Before aliya cud say anything what he said changed her life.
Zain:i divorce u...i divorce u..
Before he cud say it the third time ...he fainted.
Aliya fell on the ground.
Her hopes...her love...everything was gone.
She was moaning in pain...she was crying...she was clueless.
She gathered her wits and got up.
Kept a letter on zains bedside and left.
Left his life forever...left that house forever...wo chali gyi...zain se bht door


Morning

Zain wokeup.
He was having a hangover..he looked around but cudnt find aliya anywhere.He did not remember anything he said at night.
His eyes went on a letter on his bedside he picked it up.and started reading.

Mujhe pata hai tum mje dhoond rahe hoge.Tumhe to shayad kuch yaad bhi na ho.lekin kal raat jo hua,it changed everything.Zain mamu ki halat ka jitna dukh tumhe hai...utna mje b hai.allah janta hai k mene un me or abbu me kabhi farq nhi kia.agar mjhe pata hota k wo ghatiya shaqs mamu ki iss halat ka zimmedar hai to me khud use saza deti.Use bachane ki ghalti k lie i feel guilty..everyday..every second.Mje pata hai zain k ab tum b mj se nafrat karte ho.Or kal raat ye mje pata chal gya.Tum ne mje do baar talaaq dedi kal zain or teesri baar do...is se pehle me khud hi jaa rhi hu.Tumhari zindagi se bht door.Kahan jaungi pata nhi.Ami abu k ghar to nhi jau gi lekin kisi esi jaga zaroor jau gi jahan mje koi dhoond na pae.chahe tum ye samajhte raho k mene tumhe cheat kia ...magar sach ye hi hai k i loved u.Tum mj se aazaad ho.Apna khayal rakhna.Khudahafiz.

The letter fall off his hand...how cud he do this...where will he find her...what will he do now.
Kese mitaye ga wo ye dooriyan?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
you 'hope' we like it?
R u seriously kidding me?
This is awesome dear.
Zain was drunk and gave Aaliya divorce. Bechari Aaliya.
Loved the letter. And Zain was guilty I guess.
Please update soon and thanks a lot for the pm.
Really nice update. Beautifully written.
Really awesome. Please continue soon.
Thanks a lot.

-Tanya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

you 'hope' we like it?
R u seriously kidding me?
This is awesome dear.
Zain was drunk and gave Aaliya divorce. Bechari Aaliya.
Loved the letter. And Zain was guilty I guess.
Please update soon and thanks a lot for the pm.
Really nice update. Beautifully written.
Really awesome. Please continue soon.
Thanks a lot.

-Tanya.

thank u so much tanya 😳 πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
@zaya.fan
It was a awesome update...
😊 😊
I loved it...
Thanks for the pm...
Update soon.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
It was really very nice chapterπŸ‘
I felt really very bad for aliya😭 but happy that zain is guiltyπŸ˜ƒ
Update soon
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