Arjun-Abhimanyu OS : Father's Heart - Page 4

love the way u have written the story

wow it was beautiful got tears in my eyes. arjun and abhimanyu both were fearless warriors but firstly they were humans. they were the humans who couldnt bear the loss of their dear ones😭. abhimanyu was the closest to arjuns heart and his death must have been like arjuns own death for him. how mach pain must have uttara arjun and draupadi felt when abhimanyu lied dead in front of them😭. and for subadhra it must😭 have been a heart attack which she cannot bear ever in her life. i think they are great they deserve great respect. mahabharat characters i mean the star plus mahabharat they are portraying all the emotions perfectly wonder what will happen after abhimanyu dies.😭😭😭 he knew his death was certain in the cv but yet he was filled with so much of valor that it seemes he embraced death. 🤢😭all of the pandavas and yadavas and draupadi plus the uppandavas and abhimanyu faced great sacrifices throughout their lives.😭 crying so much. lovely father son bond and shaheer and paras portraying these characters are done so well they look like the real father son.👏 love them both. and i saw abhimanyus death in sbs was crying bitterly as to seeing the condition of arjun karna abhimanyu and the pandavas😭😭 but guys i just saw on the thread five of offscreen pics a jayadrath killing scene😆 but could not see it since the webpage was not available. can someone please give me some link or can u post the pic? please its a request😆

i read this wonderful piece of writing over a steaming cup of coffee!!

wow... it made me cry. 😭😭so beautifully expressed and nice that someone also mentioned Iravan. 👏👏👏

Hello there Arunita! This is the second work of yours that I am reading! I must say you have a way with words. The way you wringe out emotions all the while making it look real is simply phenomenal. Abhimanyu is indeed my weakness; I've never loved a mythological character this way. Its just too sad that we never got to see his true spirit even though Paras made it amazing with his potrayal! Its amazing; thank you so much for sharing it with me!!

Beautiful OS Arjun and Abhimanu The most loved Father Son Duo of Mahabharat , Abhimanyu is the Closest to my heart of all the Mahabharat Character .
"father promise me my child will never be deprived of your affection until he gets mature enough, promise me you will shower same even more affection for my son ,sing lullaby for him, teach weaponry same as you used to do for me, my son will find his father in you will you promise me that?"

Loved those lines of Abhimanyu . Thanks for Sharing this beautiful piece of writing .👏👏👏

😭😭Excellent as always You always make me feel what I read.Looking forward to more works

Tooo good
Loved the way you portrayed arjun's feelings
Truly a master piece
Keep up the good work

Oh! I read this a long time ago when I was not even a part of the forum so I could not tell you what a beautiful piece of art u have written. I always have emphasized with Iravant a lot and believe that he deserves as much respect and love as the other sons of Arjuna but unfortunately he is not one of the prominent characters of the Mahabharata. Thanks for writing this.

so beautiful so well composed hoped they had this moment before Abhimanyu died