ZaYa OS: Girls Night Out! **Part-3 Pg-4** 20th Sep

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi i am back with another os. I hate the ongoing and about to coming track so i guess i am going to write my own story. Here you go. Hope you all like it.

Zain was looking around the room but Aaliya was not coming inside. He had seen her last in the kitchen and she said she is preparing soup for Osman. He walked to and fro in the room and was waiting for her to come. Suddenly she walked in and went towards the cupboard and took out her clothes for the night. Zain came and hugged her from behind.
Zain: kahan jaa rhi ho?
Aaliya: tumse matlab?
Zain: arre shohar hoon tumhara. Saara matlab mujhse hi toh hai.
He turned her around as she looped his arms around his neck.
Aaliya: mere pyaare shohar. Mei sleepover ke liye shilpa ke ghar jaa rhi hoon.
Zain: lekin yeh toh wohi hai na jiski shaadi ho gyi thi. Use aur uske pati ko akela chhoro aur tum mere saath akeli rho.
He pulled her closer. Aaliya pushed him back and started to gather her clothes for the night.
Aaliya: uska shohar bahar gya hai. So i thought use entertain krne ke liye mei hi chali jaun.
Zain: aur mujhe entertain kon karega.
Aaliya: bhoot. Now let me go.
Zain: i wont.
He said trapping her way. Blocking her in between the cupboard and him.
Aaliya: zain the car is waiting.
Zain: i am waiting too.
He said moving closer.
Aaliya: zain please let me go.
Zain: why? Bored of me already?
Aaliya smiled then pushed zain back and ran out of the room.
Aaliya: good night zain. Aram se sona.
Zain: aaliya aaliya ruko!
Aaliya ran out of the room downstairs and then out of the house. Zain stopped at the stairs.
Zain: aaliya!

To be continued.
How was it people?
Good? Pathetic? Nice?
And do tell what i should write next.
And leave your comments for gods sake.
You guys never do.
Only some of you do.
Thanks a lot for reading.


INDEX
Part-1: All set to go! : Above.
Part-2: Can't stay without you! : Page 2.
Part-3: Just love bothering you! : Page 4.
Part-4: Lets go back now! : To be updated...
Part-5: Coz I love you! : To be updated..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Show Aaliya's friends saying bad things about their husbands! And Aaliya praising Zain for always supporting her ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Really nice dear๐Ÿ˜ƒShow Aaliya's friends saying bad things about their husbands! And Aaliya praising Zain for always supporting her๐Ÿ˜‰


hey thanks for the suggestion dear.
Will surely add it.
Thanks a lot for reading. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaya15


hey thanks for the suggestion dear.
Will surely add it.
Thanks a lot for reading. ๐Ÿ˜‰

You're welcomeee ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Pm me whenever u update as I'm not at my home! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-


You're welcomeee๐Ÿ˜ƒPm me whenever u update as I'm not at my home!๐Ÿ˜ณ


๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ will pkka pkka pm you. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the start
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...
Show zain and aliya missing eachother. ๐Ÿ˜›
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Hi people i am back with another part to my os. Since i wrote it once and due to some connection problem it all got flushed out so i wasn't in mood to write anything again. But still for you guys i am updating it again. So hope you appreciate it. Here you go:

Zain was not able to sleep at night. He kept turning and getting up frustrated then again hitting the bed. He wasn't sure but he now couldn't live without her. On the other hand aaliya kept thinking about her dear husband while other girls kept chatting away. Suddenly one of the girls noticed aaliya and decided to tease.
Kavita: kya hua aaliya? Jiju ki yaad aa rhi hai.
Aaliya back from the trance looked up with a flushed face. Like someone had thrown a tomato on her or something.
Aaliya: nahi kavita actually woh kya hai na ki um-
Shilpa: arre koi baat nahi aaliya. Zain jiju hai hi ese humei bhi unki yaad aa rhi hai.
Aaliya got angry while everyone laughed.
Shilpa: gaurav toh mujhe kabhi surprise bhi nahi deta. Tumhe pta hai use mera birthday bhul gya.
Kavita: haan yaar ankit bhi esa hi hai. Nikaah se pehle kya kya vaade kiye the. Chand tare thhod ke launga. Blah. Blah. Par ab use koi matlab hi nahi hai jaise. Usne mujhse ek baar bhi nahi pucha ki mei kahan jaa rhi hoon.
Shilpa: lekin yaar zain jiju ese nahi ha ii guess. Kyun aaliya?
Aaliya blushed.
Shilpa: aaliya jab se teri shaadi huyi hai na tab se tu blush krne lgi hai. Pehle waali seedhe seede keh dene waali aaliya kab banegi?
Aaliya: yaar pyaar ne mujhe badal diya hai.
All the girls: ohho!
They all laughed while aaliya smiled.

Zain was getting restless. He finally got up.
Zain: meine bhi parties kyun band kr di? Mujhe bhi sudharne ki kya zarurat thi?
Just then a idea rose his mind. He smirked and then went towards the bathroom to change.

Aaliya was missing zain. While everyone was gossiping and telling that there husbands changed from the before their nikaah to now. Suddenly the doorbell rang and the girls thought it was the pizza they had ordered.
Shilpa: aaliya can you get that please?
Aaliya: sure.
She went up to the door and opened. And there he jaw dropped to the floor as she saw ZAIN standing there with a smirk. She widened her eyes as he waved.
Zain: i know i am hot but please don't stare at least.
Aaliya saw the girls who were talking and whispered.
Aaliya: tum yaha kya kr rhe ho?
Zain: tumhara peecha i guess.
Aaliya: zain tum waapis jao.
Shilpa saw aaliya standing talking to the person outside the door.
Shilpa: is she trying to ask the man out?
She laughed as she got up and went to the door to see zain standing there.
Shilpa: jiju.
Zain: hi shilpa.
They hugged while aaliya looked at him angrily.
Shilpa: pta hai aaliya aapko hi yaad kr rhi thi.
Zain looked at aaliya.
Zain: woh dikh hi rha hai.
Kavita joined.
Kavita: hey jiju.
Zain: hi kavita.
They hugged again.
Aaliya: tum yaha kyun aaye ho?
She said trying to sound sarcastically polite.
Zain: tumse nahi milne aaya ho. I am here to meet kavita and shilpa. Zyaada bhau mat khao.
She said as he side hugged both of them.
Zain: waise it would be polite if you girls invite me in.
Shilpa: oh yeah, sorry. Come in.
He entered while aaliya followed after closing the door.
Shilpa: look who's here girls. ZAIN JIJU.

To be continued.
Hope you all liked it.
Please leave your comments and likes since its the 2nd time i am writing this.
Hope you all appreciate it.
Thanks a lot for reading.
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Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow awsm
Read both the chaps
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow di I read both d chapters it was awesome๐Ÿ‘
update soon ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and do pm me
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