FF: Only If I heard you calling out to me. (Chapter 7 UPDATED pg 21) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

That was so beautiful and I hated how much pain both zain and aliya were going through..I could picture it all in my head and it was so heart breaking..thank god u stopped or else I would have started crying..but really well done and I'm really looking forward to next update..and I love long updates so can't wait:-)

Originally posted by: funpanie

Hats off 👏

Update soon!

Do PM me!😊

😲😲😲😲...This Was Awesome Girl..!!! you are truely an awesome writer...Awesome story...Awesome you...!! Please update soon i can't wait for the next part...your name is Saheba right...?...you showed both Aliya and Zains feelings very beautifully...I just love this...keep it up..!!😃

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

😲...This Was Awesome Girl..!!! you are truely an awesome writer...Awesome story...Awesome you...!! Please update soon i can't wait for the next part...your name is Saheba right...?...you showed both Aliya and Zains feelings very beautifully...I just love this...keep it up..!!😃

Originally posted by: Silver_19

Thank you dear, I'm flattered😳 And yes I'm Saheba. What's your name?

Hey it was a nice update...
A very emotional one...
Really loved it...
Continue soon...

amazing chapter eagerly waiting for the next 😉 when r u updating btw???

Originally posted by: anandhi12

amazing chapter eagerly waiting for the next 😉 when r u updating btw???

Why no pm,Saheba? 😭 but still I found out that you've updated 😛 Brilliant update! You know I've always wanted Zain to cry in the same way here he cried outside Aaliya's room 😉 I can imagine Harshad giving a bang on performance in such scenes 😳 Anyways, this was a wonderful update. 😃 Aww! Their hospital room convo was although short but yeah it was deep ⭐️ I loved the way you wrote about how they were crying!! Thank God Zain actually saw Aaliyah crying... That was so cutee ❤️waiting for next part 😉 and yes I agree it was a short update 😛 And I don't wanna give you any suggestions on what u should include in your story! I would rather prefer that u write whatever you want! ;) I'll be happy reading your such wonderful updates 😃

I feel so bad for Zaya esp Zain..