FF: Only If I heard you calling out to me. (Chapter 7 UPDATED pg 21) - Page 7

I loved it ! <33 Wow! I too hate Zain for not supporting Aaliya :x But I seriously admire the way you penned down Zain and Usman's feelings ! The pain Usman was going through when he realised about his niece's condition was very well written 👏 Saheba, thanks for the pm 😳 And yeah thanks for finally updating 😛 Waiting for next update! Now I know you'll end your story on a happy note 😭 I love sad endings more you know 😛

Hey its really osem plzzz continue soon i m eagerly waiting for da nxt part i cannot wait to read plzzz update soon

Originally posted by: simran422

Usman loves aliya alot 😊

Really nice update!

tysm for the PM dear and do update soon.

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

I loved it ! <33 Wow! I too hate Zain for not supporting Aaliya :x But I seriously admire the way you penned down Zain and Usman's feelings ! The pain Usman was going through when he realised about his niece's condition was very well written 👏 Saheba, thanks for the pm 😳 And yeah thanks for finally updating 😛 Waiting for next update! Now I know you'll end your story on a happy note 😭 I love sad endings more you know 😛

Originally posted by: zayalove

Hey its really osem plzzz continue soon i m eagerly waiting for da nxt part i cannot wait to read plzzz update soon

Originally posted by: Silver_19

Thank you Hermain. I'm glad you felt Zain's and Usman's emotions.😳

I will do my best to update soon.

LOL right now I don't even have an ending in mind so let's see whether it's going to be happy or sad.😉

Then I should keep predicting lol 😛 Btw, you're welcome 😳

OMG saheba, amazing update

Ahh, cliffhanger again! You are evil 😆

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

OMG saheba, amazing update

finally aliya gained consciousness,

don't know what aliya is going to do now

continue soon😛

Originally posted by: musicxolover

Ahh, cliffhanger again! You are evil 😆

Before I say anything else, thanks for the PM!

Yayy, Mamu woke up! I loved how he was instantly concerned for everybody, especially Zain and Fahad. Now, he just has to be okay in the show too and everything'll be fine! :D

Talk about hitting the nail on the head...Mamu immediately knew that something was wrong between Zain and Aaliya...and he had every right to be disappointed.

And again, yayy, Aaliya woke up too! Kudos to you for the way you described Zain's relief and Aaliya's grief! While I feel bad for Zain, he does need to suffer a little bit. :P I agree with you; he gets away with things way too easily in the show! But still though...happy ending, please? 😃

Update soon? :)