FF: Only If I heard you calling out to me. (Chapter 7 UPDATED pg 21) - Page 4

Another well written update!
Very engaging story!

Hey !!

its awesome...
bechara zain... beautifully written...
it brought tears in my eyes...
its a good thing bobby is arrested...
plzzz continue soon...
and if u cn plz pm me when u update...
thanks a lot...
:)

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

It was really amazing, I really hope aliya is ok, please add some hospital romance too. And thank u so much for the pm.

Originally posted by: simran422

Another well written update!
Very engaging story!

You are an awesome writer!

Update soon!

thank you very much for the PM 😊

Originally posted by: .sasha

Hey !!

It's wonderful !

I just wished zain to react like that wen aaliya was requesting him to listen to her 😭

But no probs as at least he tried to instill some sense into his moms head 😆

I would love to read more

Continue soon😃

Sasha !!

Originally posted by: zaya15

its awesome...
bechara zain... beautifully written...
it brought tears in my eyes...
its a good thing bobby is arrested...
plzzz continue soon...
and if u cn plz pm me when u update...
thanks a lot...
:)

just read both the parts..

Originally posted by: vinu127

just read both the parts..

so glad show me aisa nahi hua

and very happy that u wrote this POV

it was so very well written dear

i loved it..

totally loved it

esp zain's thoughts and actions we very well written

do continue soon :)

it was such an awsome story.
read both parts now. U wrote zain's emotions very well.
Continue sooo & do pm me when u update 😊