FF: Only If I heard you calling out to me. (Chapter 7 UPDATED pg 21) - Page 2

LOVED IT, heartwrenching!!! Continue soon!

Originally posted by: simran422

HEY! this is so damn GOOODDD :)
Plzz conti soon and dun forget to PM me philzzz!
You are an awesome writer :)

Originally posted by: _Littles12_

2nd COmment Ress,

LOL Sorry was too excited😆

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OMFG THAT WAS SO AMAZING! Honestly no joke your one hella good writer❤️

the emotions, the dialogues, everything was on point.

So much happened stupid Barkat and Suraiya idiots- I so wanna kill them

I loved how Zain threw the phone on the floor after snatching it.

Imagine how great it would if Zain actually said this to Suraiya in the show, OMG i will freaking fall of a cliff or something.

You depicted Zain's pain so incredible, his yearning and regret for her was so incredibly written.

Poor guy was stuck in the ad midst of his mother and his love. UGH

Better Update soon, now i cant wait,

I cannot believe this, I am just hoping Aliyah is not the one in the hospital. PLease keep her alive.

Update Soon WOman!

Great update, 😆❤️

It's a superb start!👏 I would be looking forward to the rest of the FF! Please continue soon!

Originally posted by: titleepari

It's a superb start!👏 I would be looking forward to the rest of the FF! Please continue soon!

Wonderful update , loved it to the core
Eagerly waiting for next part 😊

wonderful start.i feel bad for aliya,i don't want this happen in show no way.i hope she is fine.update soon.

This was seriously amazing.

This is seriously amazinggg, Silver 😛 (I don't know your name na that's why 😉) You've written it so well 👏 I'm sure the future chapters are going to be much more amazing as they'll have only ZaYa convos and feelings 😳 Please continue soon and PM me whenver you update. pretty pleasee... 😳 Well, did i mention that i think your FF will have a sad ending? 😛 Actually i love sad endings and all 😉

WOW...Its Awesome...I read it twice