thank u afra.. i'm taking that advice of urs.. thank u so muchIts awesome vinu keep writing waiting for next chapter now...realy excited...try to use more english so that its easy to read than hindi ...since am not gud in hindi👏👏
thanks dearOriginally posted by: RUHANIKAA
Wow amazing strt loved it!!👏
thanks for the PM😊
thank u sahar
thanks dear
thank u dearOriginally posted by: -Have.a.dream-
Wow its awesome 👏
I want to receive PMs 😊
thanks dearThe story is really very intriguing and captivating . loved the first part and the air of mystery around it wants one to know more. Eagerly waiting for the next part and thanks for the pm
thanks PriyaUr chapter rocked...
Continue soon..
Waiting for next update...
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usmy ki beti😲 badi wild hai teri imagination yaar!Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
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-----------------------------.Aliya is Usmans long lost daughter...?😆...Iss baar suri nahi Usman Sahab emotional horahe hain...😆...Achcha hai...!!!!Are Vinu suspense kills me...And this is about past..!The story is well written...👍🏼...And it is very good...ki I started making predictionsjaldi update karo next part...!!!😃👏👏👏
Thank u madhuOriginally posted by: madhufx9...
Aww jus read it😲
Loved it vinu and teeFabulous update 👏 very well written👍🏼Curiously waiting for suspense to get revealed😊Desperately waiting for zain and aliya's dance
predictions ha??Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
awesome update.Aliya is Gulam daughter and he and Usman was friend right.look like Aliya comeback to take some revenge from Abdullahs.story is getting mystreious.can't wait for next part.
itni tareef math karo.. let my feet stay on ground!Originally posted by: -Sajdey-
WHERE IS THE LOVE BUTTON? 😲 Beautifully written.👏👏 LOVED it ❤️ You know i could actually imagine all of this happening at the back of my head. oh and aaliya shouldnt underestimate my zain. Tom cruise bhi kum parhye uskay aagye😆
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 thank u dayanOriginally posted by: ZayaShiz
awesome tha yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
crap nahi tha!!jaldi se acchi chudail ki tarah update karo!!!!m w8ing.ok??aur ek hug bhi tumhaare liya🤗
thank u so muchOriginally posted by: titleepari
Very Interesting start! I am so looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon! And do send me a PM please!😊
PS: I loved Harshad's pic the suit in the first page! he looks immensely handchum & dashing!
thank u so so much aneesha.. next update coming up right awayOriginally posted by: Aneesha.
Love it vinu👍🏼...u knw while reading it ...i was imaging those scenes in my mind...itz really wonderful...waiting for next part.
Originally posted by: anjalijiji
Awesome FF Tee and Vinu 😊 Waiting for the next part.
Originally posted by: Ridz.Instigator
Amazing Start !
Plz Cont soon :)
thank u 😳Even i got those scenes in mind vinu waiting for next update👏
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