Basu Bhaiya (Page-5,6,9,11) - Page 3

Thanks for the meassage.

another beautiful parts yaar!
i loved the way they are now actually like brothers!😃
n hey thanks for making karna mischievous for the first time!😉

Hello yaar!😛

thanks to everyone for such sweet comments i thought its a nonsense writing but i actually made u all senti with my suppossed to be funny bromance well m greatful to you all for reading but i have ended this with expressing my desires so i have nothing to continue further as its not any story it was just a convo to justify both of their stand and its done. So i am not going to update this

OMG...Rosefairy...wow...wow...very beautiful one👏👏👏...brilliant potrayal of characters...loved each n every scene of kaju...its really heart touching😳...karna completely changed into an affectionate father of arjun...caring him with lots of love..saving arjun from bear,ordering him to do what he is thinking,giving warmth to his bro by allowing him to sleep on his lap...convo regarding panchaali n war depicted clearly...my heart totally broken on hearing the inner feelings of karna about his caste😭...loved to see the naughty arjun.😆..nicely making fun of karna...so mischevious...when he addressed karna as his brother,small drops of tears fell from corner of my eyes...do no how to express my happiness...this story made me feel elated n gave peace of mind...

thank u so muchhh for pm ...please continue this wonderful update if u can ...i need to read it more n more...

thanks shiny for such a long and beautiful comment , i am so pleased that it touched your heart , but i ended it no more update but surely update other story

Aww..this was light hearted yet touching one... Karna 's protective instinct and loosing patience with Arjun... Somehow with your portrayal I got feeling that I am reading about two brothers on vacation... and one is angry with other...and this way other chooses to make his elder converse with him...😊

wow di it was so cute it is adream come true 4 all of us to see arjun calling karna bhrata plz continue fast di

Wow..this is really very much heart touchng...loved the way u potrayed a fatherly figure of Karn and our beloved Arjun...their bromance is just perfect here!

Plz cntnue it..we all want to cherish it more!

hey friends thank you for all of your kind comments and @oceaneyes thanks for reading and commenting on my writing for first time

but i seriously have no idea what to continue further as the main purpose of this write up the conversation is done