Basu Bhaiya (Page-5,6,9,11) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Awesome writing n fantastic imagination...
In the initial updated that night scene where arjun was shivereing n karna asks for sol. Arjun tells how the five brothers used to sleep ... arjun feels yudi's presence in karna *supercute*!
Then there chilhdood awwi innocent n little pityful as it shows how testful the destiny was.
Keep writing... looking forward to it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
What an imagination you have...love the way you write...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
πŸ€£πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Oh my stomach aching with laghter. Os on aham finally.πŸ˜›
I luv kaju.πŸ₯³
beautifulkly written. The BEST period. Superb imagination.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In village words spread in air. News of Basu's discovery of a vanvasi boy was not suppressed for long time. In a very short span whole village was aware of the stranger child. Eager people gathered on Adhirath's house in no time.
"look the boy looks so majestic, must be a royal prince."
"his eyes are so big and expressive! He must be very intelligent."
"isnt he looking a lot like Basu of childhood? If Basu would have been as dusky as him they would have looked like two brothers."
There were so many remarks like that among Villagers
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Awesome teaser...now the readers' minds are curious...what is the writer up to???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Beautiful... πŸ‘the first one was out of the world..⭐️ the second too lovely for words..πŸ˜ƒ. but why no updates?? 😑
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Wow totally loved the KaJu parts and the BaJi parts. Please update soon.
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