friends I want to know should I post next part here or direct jump to concluding part because next part is really really bold. And although I don't use explicit words but cant help some description and mahabharat is all about boldness that I also know but here in this forum many things are not allowed so should I post the part here or anywhere else?
@ Aru...I have previously written a bold waala SS and no problems occurred but still if you feel it might cause an issue ask a DT to move the thread to FF forum where no issues on bold scene can take place!!
Sahadev's stiff lips loosen by Panchhali's soft velvet like lip's touch. He tasted sweetness as her lips entangled with his. His body thrilled as if electricity passed through him. Unknowingly his fingers tightened around her soft skin. Her kiss deepened. Her fingers clasped long traces of him. Her nail pierced his shoulder as her grip tightened. Her tongue played with his. She tasted his innocence with the kiss. The kiss was long but not aggressive from any side. At last she broke the kiss and they gasped together for air. She could feel how heavily he is breathing. She can sense his excitement with the hardness of his. She moved her lips all over his face, kissing his cheeks and forehead. "how was the first kiss Arya?" her seductive voice whispered into his ears again. Sahadev smiled coyly in response as his cheeks were turning red in blush. He was looking so sweet that Panchali couldn't help but caressing his face. "how cute you are Aarya." she murmurs. "let's take off our Jewelries arya else those will pinch us." she orders and Sahadev obeys as dream struck. As soon as they got rid of all those heavy ornaments Sahadev could feel those jewelries don't increase Panchali's beauty rather hides it."no royal ornaments are worth to this beauty." he thought. Sahadev's well built figure too got clearer to Panchali's eyes. To see him more clearly Panchali pulled his uttariya and it shield off from Sahadev's shoulder. With sweet surprise Panchali discovered wheatish skinned handsome masculine figure of her youngest husband. "who calls you a child? You are no less than your brothers, you should be desired in virgin's dream" utters Panchali under her breath. When he first time saw Sahadev , he was a boy of 15 years, his intelligent eyes were only thing she admired then. She didn't observe how the boy has grown to a strong handsome desirable youth in these 5 years. She rose up from his lap and stepped back so that they can observe each other properly. She noticed desire was making way through young prince's shy glance. She smirked. Who can ignore attraction of her? Not even a child and he is a man. She took a deep breath and took off her scarf from head. As soon as long scarf was away, her shoulder and back was uncovered to Sahadev's eyes. He felt embarrassed, in spite of growing desire he was feeling hard to keep staring at this ravishing dark flame. Panchali started loosening her saree. "what are you doing Panchali?" Sahadev closed his eyes in shyness. Panchali giggled to see Sahadev blushing. His shyness reminded her of the first night with arya Yudhisthir, the last night of her maiden life, she was blushing same way or even more when Dharmraj was opening her up. She even tried to resist but had to surrender to his strength. She had pouted in mock anger to see still an affectionate smile on Yudhisthir's handsome face after disrobing her. Later with Arya Bheemsen and Nakul things had become normal, she didn't resist much while they uncovered her on first nights. With Sabyasachi things surely will get a different level, but now with Sahadev she is in role reversal. "Not a bad experience" she thinks. "don't look down prince, mystery of life is being unfolded to you. Learn it." Panchali's mysterious voice commanded and Sahadev had no strength to ignore. He looked up and before his, surprised yet amazed, charmed eyes Panchali took off her saree, dhoti and kanchuli and appeared with eternal beauty of woman which through ages make men come to their knees. Sahadev shivered to see ravishing dark flame with her ancient glory. " Is that why woman called greatest creation of almighty?" the thought occurred as he had remained speechless for a while.
Wow!! Mujhe bohot bold bana diya!!! Loved the thoughts about my Aryaputron!! Sabyasachi Arya, app to bohot famous hogaye!!!Awesome and well written!!! Continue soon with the part!!!
Aru my rockstar..🤗First of all hats off to this unique idea.I loved the way you portrayed Sahdev and his inner feelings for Panchali.And Panchali👏how smartly she manipulated her shy Aarya to get what she wanted.Waiting for the next part dear..😃
Panchali finally managed Sahadev to desire her as she wanted him to be. The experiences of her first night esp. with Yudhisthir as well as Bheem & Nakul was well written with the flow of the story.
Well I wont comment more coz I m blushing thinking of the emotions & intensity of ur next update. ☺️ ☺️ 😉 😆
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