Amazingly done Aru.I am speechless.How easily and simply you put forward the greatest truth behind a husband -wife relationship.Loved both updates totally.And also loved the way you symbolized the lamp.Great work👏👏⭐️
I am so very sorry Rose; of the late there had been too much work piled up and I had no time in my glass. But then I forced myself to come over here and I am so glad that I did! This was an excellent piece of writing more so because it explored the dynamics between two complete opposites! On one hand we had Panchaali who is all that invoked desires in men and on the other hand we had Sahdev who perhaps was shy personified!
I coul never, honestly, think of a serious relation between these two. Panchalli being the ideal woman had cared about each and every member of her family and her husbands too had played their role but Sahdev till date seemed to me a big mystery! This brought out another facet of this man. The one we call sleepy was actually a karmyogi who was in love with this mighty woman!
You wrote is so amazingly well! I wish it could have been longer only because I am not done reading it; but you have ended it on such a high that I perhaps will not need anymore! Amazing again Rose!!
You know Aru di words are not enough to describe this beautiful work. Panchali never would have imagined that Sahadev would be saying for her when his elders brothers united. And the scene where Panchali and Sahadev spent some time alone and the conversation between both of them truly touched my heart. Really when the old age comes physical lust goes away but it the feelings in your heart for each other that keeps you united. Beautiful ending Aru di. You gave a new life to the relationship of Sahadev-Panchali and I am sure the real couple to would be happy to read it. Do write another masterpiece.
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