SHRUTI's PEN: MY FF's Index

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Posted: 9 years ago
SHRUTI's PEN: MY FF's Index

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2013 with MAANEET

out of my finished works which one you liked best? 


!--HAPPY NEW YEAR 2012--! with MAANEET pics

MAANEET DREAMY MOMENTS

Geet needs a new wardrobe (vote)

mind blowing performance by Drashti

DRASHTI IN PINK see all pages

what are you all doing now? 

WANT TO DISCUSS G-HSP SCENES? COME HERE pg1,2 

Game ... (topic closed)

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on going stories

GEET season 2 (MG FF) 

ongoing

Fate has it all set- MG# 1

 Fate has it all set- MG #2

thread # 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2492229

Fate has it all set-MG #4 

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 Telepathy and Love MG #1

 Telepathy and Love MG # 2

Telepathy and Love MG # 3

Telepathy And Love (MG)#4 

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 My only mistake! I'm a FEMALE (MG) #1

 

My only mistake! I'm a FEMALE (MG) #2


My only mistake! I'm a FEMALE (MG) #3

My only mistake! I'm a FEMALE (MG) #4

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WHAT TO EXPECT? SS


STRANGE RELATIONSHIPS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3813587

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  PLANNED LIFE ??? (MG)

thread#2.23rdJAN.2012

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We Can Be The Best! # 1 (MG)

We Can Be The Best! # 2 (MG) 

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  Gimmick (MG) SS {completed}

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 Back to us (MG) SS {completed}

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Ups and Downs (MG) SS {completed}

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SUNSHINE (MG) {completed)

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SS(MG): MY SIDE OF STORY

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SS(MG):MyFriend, MyWife&My Colleague 

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I am missing you!!!  OS?

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Posted: 9 years ago

Fate has it all set- MG# 1

 Fate has it all set- MG #2

it is a story of two Families Handa's (HSPur) Khurana's (Delhi)
 
the 2 families are very big, read the  family chart given on the page 1
 
main points and characters of the story till now
 
 
its a through and through love story between Maan and Geet
 
in this story Maan is 7 yrs older then Geet
 
both are married and Geet is pursuing her studies in Bhopal
 
Maan too lives in Bhopal but still the family insistes on Geet to stay at hostel during her studies, no one at her college knows abut her marriage, only her warden knows the truth, her teacher Sameera has a crush n Maan, she was Maan's classmate during graduation from the same college
 
Geet also works as Maan's secretary
 
they share a very healthy relationship
they are a couple in love since childhood
 
Geet is a straight forward girl, a prankster, a darling, bubbly and fun loving
she always has a upper hand in her relationship with her husband Maan
 
Maan being the eldest son but is younger to his sisters and cousins
he is very polite and humble, respects everyone, very intellegent, loves his wife to cores, does everything to make her happy
 
Dev younger to Maan, his cousin, husband of Naintara, loving Devar and also the prime target of Geet's pranks as Geet is his SAALI
 
Naintara, Geet's elder sister, nice gentle girl, adores Geet
 
Vikram Jeet younger to Dev, fears his Bhabhi Geet, but also adores her, always gets himself in some problem or other
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Posted: 9 years ago

Telepathy and Love MG #1

Telepathy and Love MG # 2

it is a story of again Maan and Geet in different setting the places remain same
 
the family background character sketches are all given
 
these two are connected to each other through telepathy, they have known about each other since they exsisted
 
Geet is a student at present at Lucknow and works under contract with KC
 
Maan is the owner of KC lives in Delhi
 
the Lucknow KC is being taken care by Sameera
 
Dev and Naintara have some what same character as in the serial
 
though Maaneet know each other they have not seen each other
 
they meet under strange circumstances when Geet is attacked by her classmate Raj
 
she struggles between life and death
 
the story is at a point where she is finding it hard to cope up with the situations she is facing after the attack

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Posted: 9 years ago

We Can Be The Best! #1 (MG)

it is a story again of Maan and Geet
 
same Handa's and Khurana's
 
read th echaracter sketch to get who is who
 
in this story both Maan and Geet are not perfect
 
they have their own insecurities
 
both fail in confidence
 
it is a story that shows how a not so confident Geet changes Maan's life and gives him his lost confidence back
 
how she stands for him when she always fails to stand for herself
 
the families are nice and co-operative
 
but remeber the Maaneet couple is complete DHAKKAN... and if you will remember this you will have no complains



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Posted: 9 years ago

My only mistake! I'm a FEMALE (MG) #1

My only mistake! I'm a FEMALE (MG) #2

my most loving story, it is a continuation of GHSP serial from the episode#30 where Brij asks Maan to marry Geet
 
it is different from the serial from this point on
 
Geet is pregnant
 
Dev is illegitimate son of Maan's late father
 
Naintara is a gold digger marries Dev for money, helps him abduct Geet and in the end is trapped in her own doings
 
Arjun is NT's bro is a simple man, adores Geet like his own sister may be more (older to Maan)
 
Sameera and Maan married 4 yrs back in present ongoing story time line
 
Savtri Devi is supporting Geet and has brought her  to Delhi as Dev's wife, as Handa's think that Dev is her grand son
 
the story will deal with how Maan punishes Dev and NT both for their deeds and later Geet will have a sweet baby girl
 
and at the end of the story they will ... wait till I reach there
 
at present Dev is in prison NT has launched a case against him under anti dowry and domestic voilene
 
Darjee (Handa's) is calling Geet to HSPur for karva Chauth with Dev
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Posted: 9 years ago

Gimmick (MG) SS {completed}

this a story telling how a real life and reel life of the actors is different

 
it has 3 main characters:
 
Maan, Geet and Sameera
 
Maan & Geet are the main lead of a serial "DRASHTI KON- struggle of a woman"
 
Sameera is Maan's fiance
 
the short story of 11 parts touches the issues as to how for TRP's the cators are forced to pretend that they also share a off screen chemistry
and how at many times it effects their real life
 
its not any attempt to defame shows that show off screen stuff, it is just an attempt to ask veiwers to let their role models lead a normal life
 
it is all said in a humourous way
on offense
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Back to us (MG) SS {completed}

another Maaneet story, it starts with light note gets painful and ends with romance
 
Maan and Geet share the same age difference of 7 yrs.. they get married under unavoidable circumstances.. child marriage.
 
they share a month of togatherness as children where Geet calls him Maan Bhai
 
then they seperate due to the week stand the elders take ... Rano, her mother is a negative character
 
the pain starts when they are seperated, Geet leads a miserable life with her mother
 
they meet again when they grow up and the romance begins
ending up in their legal marriage
 
later they have kids 😉 
 
read to know how all this happened
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Ups and Downs (MG) SS

it is a different story

here Geet is older then Maan
 
both are attatched by a bank robbery where both lost their fathers
 
the story is how Geet takes the command in Maan's life in intial years and how they fall for each other
 
and get seperated due to their ambitions
 
the story also unfolds as how Geet solves the Bank robbery case in her own way
 
at many points the age difference comes in between
 
but later age is no barrier
as the song goes  "Na umr ki seema ho
Na janm ka ho bandhan
Jab pyaar kare koi
To dekhe keval mann
Nayi reet chalaakar tum
Yeh reet amar kar do"
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Posted: 9 years ago

During Amnesia {complete}


my latest take, it is a continuation of GHSP serial from the episode where Maan forgets the last 1 and 1/2 years of his life, the time when he met Geet

 
it is different from the serial from this point on
 
the story is complete
with matter enough to last another endless journey of Geet

the only difference between the serial and the story is 

in the serial Maan is the main lead and Geet supporting lead, where as

in this story Geet is the main lead and Maan supporting lead

here I have brought the old office environment

and have tried to accommodate the forgotten people from HSPur

hope you will enjoy the journey with me 

form Geet Hui Sabse Praayi to Geet hui Sabki Pyaari
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Posted: 9 years ago
SUNSHINE (MG)

It is not my Original story, but an adoption of my favorite Pakistani Drama DHOOP KINARE
the Original story written by Haseena Moin has two central characters Dr. Ahmer Ansari and Dr. Zoya Ali Khan. apart from them the drama has Angi Zoya's friend,
Dr. Kamraan Zoya's colleague, who later is attracted to Angi and marries her in the end;
Dr. Sheena a doctor a year or two younger to Dr. Ahmer, she is attracted to him and wants him to make her a part of his life, but he treats her like a good doctor and colleague
Dr. Ibrahim, Dr. Ahmar's friend, he works for UNICEF and has come to Pakistan after 10 years
Prof. Ansari, Dr. Ahmer's Baba, who adopted him at a age of 7 or 8 and made him his son
Daddy, Angi's father, Mummy Angi's Mother, Fazi Zoya's nanny, Miayan ji Dr. Ahmer's house help and few more doctors
and last but not the least Dr. Zoya's Father, a man full of life and loves his daughter to cores, and is a very good friend of daddy
Angi is neighbors with Zoya and she is a fine arts graduate

the drama starts with the death of Prof. Ansari and Dr. Ahmer comes to know that the house which he had build with so much care is being given to some unknown girl who is PRof's daughter's daughter, this hurts him and he hates that girl with out knowing who she is, he thinks that she has stole his Baba's love
Zoya is Prof. Ansari's grand daughter who has hired the house, but she does not stay there, but feels close to the place.
Ahmer is a senior doctor under him Zoya joins as a junior doctor, and in due course of time they are attracted to each other, Dr. Sheena does not like this and discourages Zoya and also torture her so that she makes mistakes
in the end when Zoya's father has a herat attack she sells the house which is brought by Ahmer, and on learning that she is the same girl he hates he sends her the keys and leave with Dr. Ibrahim
but in the end he comes back, Dr. Sheena thinks he had  come for her but he returns for Dr. Zoya and proposes her for marriage


in my modification
Prof Ansari is Ram Kapoor
Dr. Ahmer Ansari is Manavendra Khurana
Dr. Zoya Ali Khan is Geetika
her father is Mohinder Handa
Angi is Pinky
Dr. Kamraan is Adi
Dr. Sheena is Sasha
Dr. Ibrahim is Dev Mathur

and as I don't know much about a doctor's profession I have taken them to be Architects