beautifully conceptualized and written ... felt like reading it again ... did read the last bit again tho!
excellent connectivity ... I know writing a piece of work takes alot of thinking ... and when it comes out so wonderfully its must be very gratifying ...
the shadow bit at the end leaves the readers feeling nostalgic ... great job!!!
Bheegi, this is wonderful!!
You know, I can actually see this playing out.⭐️B CVs are known to milk scenes with high emotional content, so I won't be surprised if we really get to see something like this in the show as well!!I just hope the CVs end up reading you story and give us something really memorable in the post-war scenario...
ur welcome 😊
Yess i can understand ur apathy ArDi are an unusual couple to write on without hurting any religious sentimentsBut do u remember medha posted a citation when Arjun returned from Indralok he gifted all jewelleries to herI'm sure u will do wonders if u will write it 😳
Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-
beautifully conceptualized and written ... felt like reading it again ... did read the last bit again tho!
excellent connectivity ... I know writing a piece of work takes alot of thinking ... and when it comes out so wonderfully its must be very gratifying ...
the shadow bit at the end leaves the readers feeling nostalgic ... great job!!!
Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20
hey dear...
its beautiful os.. sorry for late comment.. just read this today...yeah perhaps arjuna and govind are one... or perhaphs draupadi and madhav are one ...
Beautifully worded.
My book 'Arjun:without a doubt' is due in Nov-Dec 2014.watch out for the Arjun-Draupadi romance in it. I too am an eternal A-D fanatic.Vyas leaves their romance too dry and brief.
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