The Aftermath (Arjun-Draupadi OS) May 22 - Page 2

RosChel.Lobster

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It's beautiful and serene. ..loved it bheegi 😊

Thnks for this one 😊

Please write few more on them 😊

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taruna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

its awesome bheegi

bothe the dark men in her life seems one after the war

parth has always been the chamer but since the war and all his losses and wth madhav beside him has to come to peace wth himself

loved it write some more whenever u ve time

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xxserenaxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

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amazing os bheegi luv it to the core 👏

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smriti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

beautifully written yaar, first ArDi OS i am reading and i just loved it...keep writing more...I wish the SB ppl had ur vision and insight with regards to Arjun and Madhav being one

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bheegi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: frappie
Bheegi yet another master piece.
I love the way you exquisitely described their sophisticated relationship.
It was finespun..
For me the icing on cake was liberated Paarth's successful attempt to bring back Demanding Draupadi..
Keep writing
I feel gratified every time I read your OS
In special emphasis to the conclusion...

Thanks a lot Frappie. It's quite a task writing anything remotely romantic between Panchali and her husbands. Now I realize why SP has steered away from any overt romance😆

I've written tons of romantic stories but ArdI are the hardest couple to wrote for (without undermining the intensity of their love)

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bheegi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
love it, beyond words, very well done!

Thanks dear😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Arakshi...
Superb
awesome
Just amazing
love it sangeeta di
another master piece
veri beautifully written.

Thanks Arakshi...glad you liked it😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: harangel
Bheegi!! That was awesome!!! Such intensity and purity in your words!!May be this is what happened back then!! Who knows!! But your OS was so refreshing to read because i personally feel that this might have happened way back then!!

Thanks Harangel. We can all just imagine what might have happened. Ved Vyas didn't go very deep into the emotional relationship of Panchali with her patis, so it's all left to us to imagine but there is no doubt, the post war period much have been very sombre and sad

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: meghnakundu
It was wonderful bheegi di...one of d masterpiecse

Thanks Meghna😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
it's just amazing bheegi.
lovely. now i really want a scene like this in mb. hope cv's troll if and copy something from here.it was beautiful

Thanks Megha. I doubt we will see an extended post war track. I have a feeling like the old BRC version, they will rush into the coronation after the war with Dhrit-Gandhari apologizing and then The End😕 I want to see a complete MB one day- all the way to the swarg track

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