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1st of all welcome to BI forum..🤗 I cant tell u how happy I am about this coz ur OS has made me fall in love with u!❤️ but ur a girl *pouts* toh kya hua? I still love u...I mean the writer in u!😉
But do bear with my highly limited vocabulary!
Now my reply will be in order... I'll number it though u hav not...
1. I don't think a sketch artist will make the sketch as detailed as Zain observed his MKB!right from the shade of her hair colour to the smile to right eye opening first! I don't noe why but I find this cute😳. his heart stops for a minute???😲 Phir bhi zinda hai! Maan na padega!yeh toh super natural hai!😆 And rahi baat jaldi utneki... abb MKB ki aadat lag gayi hai toh sab kuch sweet hi lagega! Don't worry u'll stop ranting some day!😆
2. Cutie pie Zain is! 😳N equally intelligent! Wonder y he was a just pass in science!🤔he noes that his MKB loves fighting with him and she also misses him but neither will he say anything nor she! 😛That is why they are cutie pies! And the food! Careful Zain... agar aapki mummy dearest ne yeh baat sunn li na toh aapki khair nahi!🤣
3. Every thing happens for a reason...ur marriage too... so that I can go all lattoo over you????looks like that! Hehe but yes! U did not actually noe what kind of girl u wanted and I'm also glad that she turned ur world upside down! Its pretty colourful now...😳 and ur journey is definitely beyond anyone's imaginations(except the CVs obvio)😛
4. Anjali, are u a science student? A physics geek?🤓 I felt that way... White is not a colour! But coming back, I love Aliya in white too!😳😳 The railway station scene n the Quraan recitation scene! Ah! She looked just like an angel! But we kids are better!😛 Its our own thought! Yeh Zain bhi na! and the blush part-the way explained it was beyond cuteness!👏
5. This makes me remember the recent sorry scene! Them being pressed against each other in the middle of the room and him caressing her hair! Fringes actually irritate😡 but afsos! I don't hav a zain to fix it! But see how this man even adores his MKB's hair! Sach me! He is one of the best hubbys on TV! But what I loved more here is his thoughts about her eyes, her breath n her heart beat! The confusion about what her eyes want him to do is just so adorable!😳
6. My fav in this part is actually him admitting that he RESPECTs her! This has not actually happened in the show n I really want that to happen! He gotta respect her as she deserves it! And he needs to be proud of her too(which he is in the show)... his chest swells when ppl praise her!👍🏼 And her caring side is the best! The last lines made me go back to the accident scene!How much she cares for him! And he feels special...like he is her ultimatum! I love this!❤️
7.This girl and her husband are absolutely crazy! 😆And the baccha party-I love them! 😳They do hav the best chichi who really understands them!👏
8."Ganne ka juice",I piped up saying this when I read this! 😆So well explained! Aliya is much of a kiddo! I really li-loved it!👍🏼
9.Now this is not fair! Hum log yaha pe taras rahe hai to see Aliya in a saree n u making my armaanon ki doli become heavier😵! Aliya in a coral saree and they dance! That too he holds her close! This is so sadistic of u *pouts*!but its really nice that at each point he is also acknowledging the fact that things are changing and that she knows it as well!
10.Freezer! I Iove this para as much as I love the scene... its just 4 lines but that makes me feel so many things! Superb job!👏⭐️
11. BZ! 🤣I miss u man! But the way u explained PZ's POV is so cute! ⭐️And Aliya would definitely dragged him to the doctor if all the family drama was not there n she herself was not in love!😆😆😆
Ok from here on.. this is the 2nd time I'm typing this out coz of my idiotic WiFi's fiddling mood!
And I already told u I hav a very bad typing speed and all the long comment I had typed for u(spending nearly more than an hour)was lost coz of it! But I hav to unres in quite a lot of places.. so pls forgive for short comment from part 12 onwards.. really sorry!
So here is the rest of the comment!
12.its so endearing to see how much zain missed Aliya in just 10-12 hrs! and him pulling away the blanket off her face-how caring he is!😳
13. poor his friends😆! I really love this jealous side of zain!❤️ He looks too cute with the gubbare ki tarah phoola hua face!and I sympathise with those poor servents! Band baj gayi hogi unki toh!😆
14.aliya is such a pure soul! Tiny things making her feel on top of the world! Zain must havthought how lucky he was!😃
15.this was one of the best... how he feels emptiness grip him when she leaves his hand!😳 And also the fact that she holds his hand unconsciously... anjaan hote hue bhi saath deti hai woh iski!😊
16.this one is another cute part! Her smiling coyly is actually better than blush.. kitna blush karegi who bhi bechari😆
17.hate club for Aliya?!😲anyways I don't mind! Its coz those velle aunties were badmouthing Zain! I would hav mixed something in their drink for that😡! Coz its only me n Aliya who can insult him 😉
18.let her never find out!warna yeh phattu who bhi roklega!and is this not how sweet their realtion is that he knows how happy they r with each other.. that she loves him..⭐️
19.the 2nd best part as far as I'm concerned👏!and I noe zain wants to surprise her but agar yeh aise behki behki harkatein karega toh bechari who kya karegi?😆i loved the part where he picks her up to place her on the bonnet! He would hav mentally slapped himself before noeing the reason for her crying, wouldn't he?😛
I really loved this line!⭐️I do have other choices but I really just want to kiss you
20.he is calling her wifey? Ermm,... I prefer MKB🤔!cute hai!and neither do I mind the kids thinking they are gross'😛
21.how cute was that! Both ZaYa feel they cannot be good parents and reassure each other that can never be bad! I loved that!❤️
22. Zain back to being utpatang!😆 reading baby books! Aliya must be feeling lucky😳! And do all couples fight over this which baby part? Mom always wants a boy n dada girl?😕
23.suri is too experienced na? 4th delivery in her house! 🤣i can imagine how happy the 2 would hav been that day! Being blessed with 2 beautiful gifts together!
24. remember I said meteor shower was 2nd best? This was the best!⭐️ Zaya and Rehan are miniature copies of their cutest parents😊! Zaiin being the cuter among the 2 !mmm-kaaay-bayy? Like really?i'm not ashamed to say that my eyes r wet too!
25.picture perfect! Zain telling the 2 angels their love story as bed time stories, tucking them while Aliya sees all this! Just perfect!👏
Uff! So done! This is in total my longest review till now!
U are amazing! They way you hav narrated this entite story in Zain's POV.. Anjali di, I salute u!👏👏
Loved it to bits! And I will love to read Aliya's POV if u ever plan to write!
Thank u for this wonderful OS!🤗
p.s. i noe this is late n I hav res-ed posts on other Os/Ts of urs as well.. they will take more time perhaps! Really sorry about being such a latelateef!😭
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