Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever
Its superb Dear I luv dis most all of ur work really amazing 👏
N last pe i want a happy ending but u gve us opn ending koi nhi chale ga...
Plzz write more stories like dis 😉
Originally posted by: flora212
First of all sorry for commenting late. I read it before eid and I forgot to unres my coments as I got too busy. Anyways I forgot where I actually resed😕 so doing again.😆
Ok now coming to story it was brilliant and different story. Blade and steel both are brave😃 this is one kind of different love story. And surprisingly I loved the ending. Though you gave an open end but its happy ending for me in both way😛 both abhay piya shot sid and was saved or both of them died its happy ending😆 cause wherever they are they are togetherI am glad you didn't kill one of them😛 and even you killed you killed both 😆 okay overall it was outstanding story.
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