ZAYA OS: I AM SORRY!! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY I AM BACK WITH PART 3...
PART 3:

zain and aaliya were in their room... while downstairs was a huge mess... they all were confused... while someone there was ashamed... yes... that would be surraiya osman abdullah.. she was ashamed of what she said to aaliya... it was true that aaliya brought barkat back to this house... why would she say something like that to barkat... zain was right... she may hv just asked a question... and may be those were crocodile tears in her eyes... maybe aaliya was right... maybe barkat would have told nafisa and shazia that she will divide the property between them... and she talked about her okath? omg... what should she do now?
she went straight into their room and stood at the entrance... aaliya was talking to zain... aaliya looked up as she realized that surraiya was there...
aaliya: arre maami... aap yaha...
zain also stood up with aaliya...
surraiya: haan... aaliya... um... mei tumse baat kr skti hoon?
aaliya looked at zain... who was frowning...
aaliya: umm sure maami...
suraiya: thanks... zara bahar aana...
aaliya again looked at zain and walked to her..
surraiya took her outside and there she held aaliya's hand in her...
surraiya: aaliya pls mujhe maaf kr do... mujhe woh sab nhi kehna chahiye tha.. i dont know mei itni stupid kab se ho gyi hoon.. par mujhe yeh nhi pata that ki barkat nafisa aur shazia ka brainwash kar rhi hai.. i am really sorry...
aaliya: arre maami.. aap sorry mat boliye... mujhe hi barkat se yeh nhi kehna chahiye tha.. bechari ko kitna bura laga hoga.. sorry maami..
and they hugged.. zain had been watching this... somehow he still felt bad for aaliya... how much he tried to get over this feeling... but he couldnt.. he had to start trusting her... the more he remembered the incident the more he started to hate himself...

LATER THAT DAY IN THE KITCHEN...
aaliya was cooking food for everyone... it was really hot that day... she was sweating all over... the fan was working but the moment she would switch the fan on... the stove would blow off... so she had no choice but the stand in the hot... the heat of the stove felt like it was burning aaliya's face... then walked in zain abdullah... the moment he walked in he saw her sweating in the hot... he stood beside her...
zain: itni garmi mei kaam kiya ja rha hai tumse?
aaliya looked at zain... he was trying to remove the sweat on his neck...
aaliya: haan.. krna padhta hai...
zain: pankha hai toh sahi... chala lo..
aaliya shook her head..
aaliya: arre zain meine toh socha hi nhi... pankha bhi toh hai... mei toh roz yahi kaam krti hoon... par meine aaj tak yeh pankha hi nhi dekha..(she said sarcasticaly)
zain still confused..
aaliya: zain abdullah... yaha tumhe agar dikh na rha ho... toh mei yeh bata doon ki gas on hai.. pankha chaloongi toh gas bhuj nhi jayegi...
zain shook his head... then aaliya turned back to the stove.. zain came and stood behind aaliya... she could feel the closeness and tried really hard not to show it... not to blush as she usually did... and not to feel nervous and she most of time does now.. he stood their knowing the effect he was having on her... he slowly closed his head a bit and blew cold breaths on her neck... aaliya closed her eyes in pleasure... this felt good to her... then suddenly aaliya realized what she had done... she she had accidently closed her hand too much towards the stove that her hand was burnt.. not the hand but basically the finger.. index finger... she screamed in pain... zain got tensed... she turned around.. and zain saw her burnt hand.. he immediately took her near the sink and turned on the tap... he poured cold water on her hand... aaliya was still screaming... she tried really hard to control her pain... seeing aaliya screaming and crying.. zain felt his eyes wet as well.. why? then finally when she felt okay.. she then opened her eyes... which she had closed due to the pain.. zain looked at her... she looked at him... zain took her to the room... he ran and brought burnheal cream and applied it on her hand... she was still crying... as still feeling the pain as he gently put the cream on her hand... next he brought the bandage and put it on her hand... after the dressing was done zain sat next to her... he had made her sit on the bed and sat himself on the ground... right now he sat on the bed next to her...
zain: theek hai ab?
aaliya: thanks kitkit..
zain: mention not mamu ki bhanji...
they smiled at each other...
zain: waise can i ask you a question?
aaliya: hmm?
zain: tumhe kal raat ko konsa sapna aaya tha?
aaliya: matlab?
zain: matlab... jiss sapne se tum chila rhi thi aur meine tumhe uttaya toh tumne mujhe hug kr liya...
aaliya blushed..
aaliya: meine tumhe hug kiya?
zain: haan.. toh kya hua? shohar hi toh hoon... koi ger todhi na hoon..
aaliya was still blushing..
zain: blush krna band kr diya ho toh bta bhi do..
aaliya: kya?
zain: ki what was the nightmare...
aaliya: woh..
before aaliya could say anything the servant arrived..
servant: ma'am... surraiya madam aapko bula rhi hai...
aaliya: unse kaho mei aa rhi hoon..
then she turned back to zain.. who was still smiling at her...
aaliya: chale?
zain: chalo..

DOWNSTAIRS..
everyone was chatting.. talking... and eating of course... but there was someone who wasnt able to eat.. and that would be aaliya... zain was kicking her beneath the table.. then sometimes tickling her... sometimes she laughed and everyone stared at her... she used to then look down at her food.. zain who was having a smirk on his eyes looked at aaliya...
aaliya: zain?
aaliya whispered in his ear..
zain: hmm?
aaliya: tum muche tickle krna band kroge...
zain let out a small laugh...
zain: mkb.. meine toh band krna nahi hai...
aaliya: kitkit..
then she had to sit.. there where he was tickling her.. sometimes kicking her leg... she could not stand it anymore.. but had to...
osman: zain bete... tum agar do minute aaliya ko tickle krna band kro toh mei tumhe kuch bta skta hoon?
zain stopped tickling... they both shocked.. aaliya blushed while looking down... zain looked at her...
osman: mei bol rha tha ki aaj subah jo hua uske baad mujhe kuch cheeze clear krni hai..
zain: konsi cheeze dad?
osman: bete mujhe shazia aur nafisa se puchna hai ki kya barkat ne unhe sach mei ese kuch kaha hai?
shazia and nafisa looked at each other..
osman: batao bete... kya barkat ne tumhe sach mei yeh kaha hai?
shazia: haan...
nafisa also nodded...
osman turned to barkat..
osman; kyun barkat?
barkat: abbu... abbu mir khan.. abbu mir khan ne mujhe kaha hai ki meine agar yeh batwaara nhi karwaya toh woh mujhe tabah kr dega.. uske paas mere khilaf kuch saboot hai.. uske paas kuch esi tasfeere hai jo kuch aur hi dekhati hai... abbu meine mir khan ke dabav mei aake yeh sab kaha hai.. yeh sach hai ki aaliya bhabhi ne mujhse kuch nhi kaha... par jab unhone pucha... tab mere paas koi jawab nhi tha... agar mei kuch kehti toh unhe pta chal jaata ki yeh sab mera kiya dharaya hai... aur agar unhe yeh pta chal jaata toh mera plan succesful nhi ho pata...
she looked at aaliya...
barkat: i am sorry bhabhi... mujhe laga agar mei bhaiyu ko aapke khilaf kr dungi toh mere plan aur bhi succesful ho jayega... sorry bhaiyu...
zain: buk-buk...
barkat: abbu mir khan ka kehna hai ki ye sab uska hai... yeh sab uski baje se hua hai par meine unhi kayi baar kaha ki yeh sahi nhi hai... par unhone ne nhi maana.. unhone mujhe maara... peeta... mujhe laga ki agar mei yeh kaam kr dungi toh woh.. woh tasfeere nhi dalenge... unhone kaha ki agar ye kaam nhi hua toh woh mujhe zaleel kr denge.. i am sorry..
then she started crying... and this was not her drama... that actually was the truth... mir khan had threatened her...
zain and aaliya stood up and walked towards barkat... they put their hand on either shoulder of her...
zain: buk-buk tum tension mat lo..
aaliya: haan barkat.. ab tumhe kisi cheez ki tension lene ki zarurat nhi..
they both looked at each other...

TO BE CONTINUED...
HOPE YOU LIKE THIS PART AS WELL...
JUST YOU KNOW I THINK THIS MIGHT HAPPEN IN THE SHOW AS WELL..
BARKAT IS THE REAL BARKAT..
NEXT PART WILL BE UP BY TOMORROW...
THANKS..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome updates.i hope those happen in show too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY AND I AM SORRY FOR THE DELAY...
HERE IS THE NEXT PART...

PART - 4
zain and aaliya were shocked when barkat told everything to the family... so it was right... she did want the batwaara but not for herself... it was for mir khan... how could he... he hit her? used to beat her? thts it... zain decided it was time to make mir khan realize who's sister he had dealt with...

IN ZAYA ROOM...
zain: mujhe toh yeh vishwas nhi ho rha ki barkat ne yeh sab mir khan ke liye kiya...
aaliya: par zain... isme barkat ki koi galti kaha hai...
zain: chalo...
aaliya: kaha?
zain: mir khan ke paas...
aaliya saw barkat...
aaliya: zain... mujhe lagta hai barkat ko bhi humare saath chalna chahiye...
zain: hmm... baat toh tumhari sahi hai mkb... chalo barkat...
barkat: lekin bhaiyu... mir khan...
zain: woh tumhe kuch nhi kr payega... hum hai tumhare saath...
barkat: theek hai...

MIR KHAN'S HOUSE...
zain and aaliya decided to hide... if they didnt mir khan wouldnt open the door... they decided to make mir khan see barkat first...
mir khan: arre barkat... aao andhar aao...
just then zain and aaliya popped out of either sides of the door...
mir khan shocked...
zain: kyun mir khan... humein andhar nhi bulaoge kya?
aaliya: tumhe kya laga... tum barkat ko jitna chahe zaleel krna chahoge... utna karoge aur humein pta tak nhi chalega?
mir khan looked at barkat angryily... zain noticed barkat getting scared... he came and stood in front of barkat... making her feel safe...
zain: aage se agar meri behan ke aas paas bhi dikhe na... toh tum dekhna...
aaliya: uski nobat nhi aayegi... meine police ko bula liya hai...
just then the police arrived...
mir khan: nahi aaliya beti... mei tumhara chacha hoon... tum meri aankho ke samne badi hui ho... meri bhatiji ho tum... apne chachu ko ek aur moka de do... pls aaliya...
aaliya got angry... zain could clearly see that she was angry... as a matter of fact he had never seen her this angry... i mean that of course she had been angry many a times since their nikaah... but he had never seen this much anger in her eyes...
aaliya: nahi... na aap mere chachu hai na mei aapki bhatiji... mere chachu mere liye tab se marr gaye hai jabse unhone mere sasural ki beti ko kidnap kiya hai...
zain wanted to smile... it was really stupid to smile at such tension and angry moments... but... when ever she addressed the abdullah family as her sasural... he could not help but smile... however right now he somehow managed to hide the smile...
mir khan was taken away by the policemen... aaliya was still angry... zain kept a supporting hand on her shoulder...
zain: thanks... (he said with a smile...)
aaliya then smiled from a angry look...
aaliya: kyun zain abdullah... meine jo bhi kiya hai woh meri nanand ke liye... tumhare liye nahi...
then she kept her hands on barkat's shoulder... they all started laughing after a while... then they hugged...

IN ZAYA ROOM AT NIGHT...

zain: waise tumne notice kiya ki tumne barkat ko nanand kaha hai...
aaliya was keeping the clothes inside the wadrobe...
aaliya: ab nanand ko nanand hi kahoongi na... nani todhi na kahoongi...
zain: waise nanand ka matlab kya hota hai? (he said to tease her).
aaliya came and sat beside him...
aaliya: nice try lekin mei nhi phasne waali...
zain let out a laugh...
they both changed and were almost going to bed... when zain brought a coffee..
aaliya: itni raat ko coffee... aaj sona nhi hai kya kitkit...
zain: mkb... mei har roz coffee peeta hoon... tumhe apne kaam se matlab rakho na...
and then suddenly zain spilled coffee on the bed... it was aaliya's side... where she kept her head...
aaliya: zain! tumhe coffee kyun gira di...
zain: arre mamu ki bhanji tum toh ese keh rhi ho jese meine yeh jaan mooch ke kiya ho...
aaliya: ab tum uss side so oge..
zain: arre bedsheet change kr lo na... isme konsi badi baat hai...
aaliya: zain raat ke 12 baj rhe hai.. mujhe neend aa rhi hai... i dnt have tht much energy ki mei bedsheet change kro..
she said while yawning...
zain: toh phir tum couch pe so jao...
aaliya: accha coffee tum girao... aur couch pe mei soon? no way...
zain: theek hai phir tum meri taraf sir rakh ke so jao... waise bhi coffee ka stain tumhare pero ko kuch nhi karega...
aaliya shook her head in disappointment...
aaliya: theek hai (she said with a sigh..)
zain: k..
they both slept in the same direction...

NEXT MORNING...
zain woke and saw aaliya's and his hands entwined... he also noticed that they were a bit closer to each other... zain felt nice... nice that finally everything was gonna be alright... everything was alright... this felt wonderful...

THE END...
HOPE YOU LIKE IT...
PLS LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKES...
IT MEANS A LOT TO ME...
THANKS..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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keep writing dear...😛😛
i love to read ur updates...👏👏
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written..good work..👍🏼


thanks so much...
really loved to know that you liked it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm story
loved it
very beautifully written
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Nyc story :)
Do continue soon tanya !!
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Read all parts together, loved them! I wish barkat was good, and really Zain's sister 😔 but what was the dream? Was it k Zain ne Aaliya ko chor diya?
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