ZAYA OS: I AM SORRY!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY GUYS I AM TANYA..
HERE I AM WITH A BRAND NEW OS...
THIS IS FROM YESTERDAYS PRECAP PROMO..


I AM SORRY
zain was feeling bad for the way he had scolded aaliya... how could he do this to her? how could he scold her even without knowing the truth... barkat could have overexgarated... she would have been wrong... but no... how could he think that aaliya could do something like that to his so called baby sister?... no he was wrong... he should have listened to her.. he loved his sister... but more than that he loved her... she meant everything to him... and they way he scolded her was no good.. how could he do this? she may have just asked a simple question to barkat and she would have probably just overtold everything.. how much he wanted to kill himself right now.. how.. how did he do that? she was just there to apologize maybe.. she was not there to look at the drama scene.. no.. he was wrong.. he was so wrong.. he had to apologize now.. he had to say sorry.. being zain abdullah he probably never had said sorry to a girl... but no... now he has to.. now he is not saying sorry to girl but saying sorry to the person who means everything to him... she is not just a girl... she is lot more than that to him.. he had to say sorry now.. and he was ready for..

on the other hand aaliya was crying..th why did he do that? does she mean nothing to him? nothing at all? they were friends now and they didnt trust each other? she trusted him... but he didnt? how could he even think that she could say something like that to barkat.. but why did she try to cut her wrist.. she wasnt gonna actually cut it.. but zain thought that she was.. no... aaliya knew that barkat was up to something... something that is gonna destroy the abdullah family... she didnt care anymore that he scolded her or shouted at her.. all she cared was that she loved him.. maybe he didnt.. maybe he just thought of her as her friend.. but after this incident she thought that.. that he didnt even think of her as a friend.. he didnt even think once that maybe barkat could have been wrong.. she knew zain loved his sister.. but that doesnt mean that... no.. she should not be thinking about this.. why would zain be in love with her? he is zain abdullah... as he claimed earlier milions of girls would die after him.. and he would fall in love with a bhopali girl.. pooh that new gonna happen..

in walked zain.. he saw her sitting at the head of the couch... facing the pool... her tears twinkled in the light.. the thought that he had brought those tears killed his insides... why? then he walked up to her.. she didnt look up... he sat beside her.. very close... closer than they have ever sat...
zain: i am sorry..
aaliya looked at him and shifted a bit to the side... to get some distance... then looked back at the pool.. but being zain abdullah he shifted towards her side...
zain: kahan na i am sorry...
aaliya stood up and was about to leave... when.. he grabbed her wrist and rolled it behind her waist... she looked at him.. he saw her hair closed by a hair clip... how much he hated when she tied her hair... he loved her open hair.. and couldnt see it tied.. he moved his free hand and was about to open the clip when aaliya's hand came on top of it.. but he was also adamant.. he opened the clip and fall out her hair.. her silky strands and her beautiful curls.. zain took away the clip to himself.. still holding her...
aaliya: mera clip waapis do..
zain was still roaming it around while aaliya was trying to snatch it away.. he was smiling... smiling at her antics... her fails to catch the clip.. and then zain lost his balance... losing his balance he fall on the bed... and due to his grip on aaliya's hand she fall on top of him... zain being strong was able to lift her weight.. while aaliya stood their surprised... they looked at each others eyes... they instantly lost in them... then breaking the eye contact aaliya tried to stand up.. she pushed her hands on the side and lifted her body but then miserably fall.. and this time they became more close... she then tried again and this time she was able to.. able to stand but she lost her balance and was about to fall when two hands caught her on the right time and grabbed her up... zain looked into her eyes while she looked into his.. they both lost again...
zain: waise tumne kaha kya tha barkat se jisse use laga ki tum uspe ilzam laga rhi ho... sach mei ilzam toh nhi lagaya na (he said jokingly)
at this she straightened herself and stood in front of him...
aaliya: (she told what she had seen... done... was about to do... barkat's drama to cut her wrist...)
zain was shocked... he couldnt imagine that barkat would want to do the batwaara... he didnt knew that she wanted the batwara to happen... but what will she get if it does..
zain: are you sure about that?
aaliya: ya i am 200% sure..
zain: okay then.. raat ho gyi hai so jao.. kal subah baat karenge..
aaliya: fine..
they both changed and both slept..
zain: good night mamu kii bhanji..
aaliya: good night kitkit
and they slept...

TO BE CONTINUED..
NEXT PART WOULD BE UP BY TODAY EVENING..
BEFORE BEINTEHAA'S EPISODE..
PLS COMMENT AND LIKE..
THANKS A LOT..


INDEX: (links are not clickable)
PART-1: ABOVE...
PART 2: PAGE 1... (scroll down)
PART 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4022762&TPN=2

MY OTHER WORKS: (the link is not clickable)
JEALOUSY: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4025765&PID=106587860&#p106587860

BECAUSE I LOVE YOU: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4020020

IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO VIEW THIS CLIP IN THE EPISODE HERE'S THE LINK: (sorry the link is not clickable)
http://colors.in.com/in/videos/beintehaa/fahad-and-shazia-argue-ep98-beintehaa-60988.html
(NOTE: sorry couldnt cut the thing... so without watching the fahad and shazia fight just reach to the end of it and watch zaya scene...)
THANKS..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
IT REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME...
THANKS..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
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beautifully written๐Ÿ˜ณ
Zain believed MKB easily...aisa show me hoga kya?๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by sarcastic_teen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb,i wish that happen in show too.continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I AM HERE WITH A NEW PART..
PART 2:

zain and aaliya were sleeping... suddenly aaliya started screaming.. she was having a really bad nightmare... zain woke up and got scared... he woke aaliya by shaking her legs.. and she opened her eyes... scared she got up and suddenly hugged zain.. zain gasped in surprise... zain calmly rubbed her back.. he rubbed through her hair..
zain: shh... aaliya everything is alright... i am here.. shh..
aaliya was still crying...
aaliya: zain...
zain: shh.. its ok..
aaliya: i am sorry...
zain: kis baat ke liye?
aaliya: mujhe barkat ko woh sab nhi kehna chahiye tha..
zain felt bad..
zain: shh.. tumne kuch galat nhi kiya... shh dnt cry aaliya..
aaliya then fall asleep on his shoulder... zain made her lie down next to him on his side and covered her with the blanket... then slowly carressed her forehead and then when he was sure she had fallen asleep he fall asleep himself...

IN THE MORNING..
zain was sleeping when sunlight entered the room... it really irratated his eyes... he wanted to shut it down... but he couldnt... then fed up he woke up and rubbed his eyes... he saw someone on the dressing table and rubbed his eyes to get a clear image...
zain: good morning...
aaliya smiled..
aaliya: good morning...
zain: aaj itni jaldi utt gyi...
aaliya: zain abdullah... its 8:30 am..
zain: what?
he said as he glanced at the clock... she was right... it was 8:30 am... he quickly woke up... wore his slippers and then ran towards the bathroom... aaliya shook her head and turned back to the mirror... she smiled and then left the room...

DINNER TABLE...
aaliya had made the breakfast... she was serving everyone... when she came to surraiya... she refused to eat it... she couldnt imagine that aaliya would say anything like that to barkat... then aaliya moved forward and stopped at barkat... barkat let out a fake smile... and aaliya served the food with a smile... then aaliya served others and sat down herself... then everyone started eating... aaliya roamed her sight and it reached at zain who was coming downstairs... a smile lit up her face which she tried really hard to hide... zain came towards the dinning table...
zain: aslam valekum dad...
osman: valekum aslam zain... aao beto...
zain took a seat next to aaliya and smiled... she smiled back... then stood up and started serving him the food while he just smiled... then she sat back down and again they smiled at each other... surraiya watched this scenario and decided to confront...
surraiya: aaliya?
aaliya: ji maami?
suraiya: tumne kal kuch kaha tha barkat se...
aaliya looked at zain who was looking at her...
osman: kya baat hai surraiya begum? kya hua..
surraiya: osman sahb kal aapki pyaari bahu ne aapki beti ko yeh kaha hai ki yeh batwaara unki baje se ho rha hai... aapki bahu ne usse rulaya hai...
they whole family shocked..
fahad: yeh aap kya keh rhi hai mom?
zain: mom..
surraiya: bas zain... mujhe ab kehne do... osman sahb... kal barkat ne mujhe sab kuch bataya hai... aaliya ne usse kaha ki usne batwaare ka idea nafisa aur shazia ko diya hai... ki barkat chahti hai ki iss ghar mei batwaara ho..
osman shocked and turned towards aaliya who was looking at surraiya... with tears in her eyes...
osman: surraiya begum aap yeh kya keh rhi hai... aaliya esa kuch kyun kahegi... aapko zaroor koi galatfemi hui hai...
barkat stood there smirking...
surraiya then turned to aaliya...
surraiya: pehle mujhe bhi lga tha ki aaliya esa kuch kyun kahegi... par.. par jab meine apni beti ke aankho mei aanso dekhe toh mujhe pata chal gya... osman sahb aaliya ne woh sab kiya hai..
zain looked at aaliya who was crying silently..
surraiya: bolo na aaliya... tumse dusro ki khushi nhi dekhi jaati kya? bura lag rha tha ki barkat itni khush hai? bolo na aaliya... yeh crocodile tears kyun? kyun nhi dekha deti tumhari okath kya hai?
zain got angry.. he couldnt stand one more word against aaliya... he then saw aaliya who had now started crying harder... he himself felt his eyes wet... thts it he had to take a stand now..
surraiya was gonna start insulting again... but.. zain stood up... he was fuming with anger...
zain: bas mom... bahaut insult kar liya aapne aaliya ko... aapko yehi lagta hai na ki aaliya ne barkat se woh sab kaha hai... aapko yehi lagta hai na ki yeh sab sach hai? toh ek sach mei bhi aapko bta doon... jab aaliya ne dekha ki barkat ne nafisa bhabhi ko kaha hai ki woh batwaara hote hi apna aadha hissa unhe de gi aur baaki ka shazia bhabhi ko toh usne barkat se pucha... barkat ne mujhe aate dekha aur phir mujhe aake kaha ki aaliya ne uspe ilzam lagaya hai... mujhse bhi uske aanso... pooh! konse aanso? crocodile tears dekhe nhi gye toh meine bhi aaliya ko daat diya..
everyone shocked... osman especially... he looked at aaliya looking at zain...
zain: mom... aap iski okath ki baat kr rhi hai na... toh mei bhi aapko ek baat yaad dila doon... iss ghar mei barkat... sirf aur sirf aaliya ki baje se loti hai... aaliya ki okath ki baat nahi hi ki jaye toh aap sab ke liye bahaut... kyunki jitni iski okath hai... uska aap andaza bhi nahi laga skte... aur rhi baat barkat kii... agar aapke uspe aankhe band kr ke vishwas krna hai toh shock se kariye... par ek baat mujhe bhi bataiye... jab aaliya ne usse pucha ki woh batwaara kra rhi hai ya nhi toh woh seedha seedha mana kr deti na... itna drama krne ki kya zarurat thi?
zain looked at aaliya and then back at surraiya... fahad also stood up now..
fahad: mom... nafisa ne baccho se kaha tha ki is ghar ki malkin barkat hai aur woh inhe iss ghar se nikal degi... toh agar aapko abhi bhi lagta hai ki aaliya galat hai... toh woh aapki bhul hai..
zain then looked at fahad and nodded his head.. then back at aaliya and took her hand in his and walked towards the room... aaliya followed him... everyone stood back surprised...

IN ZAYA ROOM...
zain and aaliya reached the room... zain stopped and left aaliya's hand and turned back towards her... she was still crying... he couldnt see this... but he had to... no other choice... then aaliya suddenly hugged zain and zain hugged her back...
aaliya: thanks so much zain...
zain: arre meri biwi pe koi ungli uttaye toh mei gussa nhi honga?
aaliya smiled... still crying..
zain pulled back...
zain: ab toh rona band kr do mamu ki bhanji...
aaliya smiled and wiped her tears... a huge smile spread on her face...
zain: i am sorry... aage se mei hamesha tumpe bharosa krunga...
aaliya: its ok kitkit...
then they realized what had happened... they started laughing thinking about it... while aaliya zain admired her... and vice versa.. they meant everything to each other...

TO BE CONTINUED...
NEXT PART UP TO TONIGHT OR TOMORROW...
HOPE YOU LIKED IT..
SRRY IF THIS PART WAS BORING... NEXT PART WILL BE FUN...
PROMISE..
THANKS...
Edited by zaya15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic
Wow zain stood up for aliya hope this happens in show also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update fast!
Cant wait... ๐Ÿ˜†
Nicely written.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing work sweetie๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›dont be upset that likes are less just see that how many pwople r liking it... u shud write even if u have 1 like bcz that one like means one person liked ur writing and its a big thing... keep it up...
loved how zain protected aaliya... hope he does the same in serial..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
sorry for late reply๐Ÿฅฑ
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi_taareyfan

amazing work sweetie๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›dont be upset that likes are less just see that how many pwople r liking it... u shud write even if u have 1 like bcz that one like means one person liked ur writing and its a big thing... keep it up...

loved how zain protected aaliya... hope he does the same in serial..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
sorry for late reply๐Ÿฅฑ
thanks for the pm


thank you so so much...๐Ÿ˜Š
i loved to know that you liked it..
will surely update tomorrow..
its ok..
and your welcome..๐Ÿ˜›
and i too hope this happens in the serial..๐Ÿ˜†
if it does it would be so amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loveddd ittt...
pm me plzzz
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very well written..good work..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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