Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
such a cute and romantic os.i love the naughty zain.keep writing.
Originally posted by: ZayaHarshika
Aaah...i remember that scene...that was one heck of a scene...bathup romance 😳 😳
U've written thiss beautifully...luking forward to more 😉
awww...isha this one was extremely cute..😳
i esp liked how Aliya's mind n heart played with her...(the part before she entered the room) really well written part..👏its my wish that ZaYa shld fall in a bath tub together... i doubt it will ever happen on BI😒 but atleast happy that u wrote about it!😃m not gonna talk about any of the kisses... i'll go really besharam 😉☺️the last part was really natural n genuine types... so cute..😳all in all.. like every other writer in this forum, u hav also made me fall hard for Zain all over again!☺️wonder y all writes are so Zaalim!coz they r mostly girls?🤪hehe... anyways.. this was beautiful..😊keep writing n keep sending me PM's
Originally posted by: BlossomingRose
Omg, this is really amazing! Loved it!
You suck at writing lovey dovey stuff do you, don't think so! 😊
Well done, do continue to write more! 👍🏼
Originally posted by: zayalove
Very well described
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