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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
WoW!
What an awesome blossom update! LOVED IT.. !!

I loved your way of writing!
And .. ahhh, this was definitely a hell lot better date from what CV's arranged.
I loved the Ending! 😊
A kiss on the forehead was fine but I expected something more, you know 😉

Do write more on ZaYa 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NinjaInPyjamas

Oh my god Sruuu!! That gave me the heebijeebies!! This was really nice!
Write more, will ya? :)

I will edit my post and comment in detail soon!


Thanks ji ninjaaa. 😳


Originally posted by: Emaani.95

WoW!

What an awesome blossom update! LOVED IT.. !!

I loved your way of writing!
And .. ahhh, this was definitely a hell lot better date from what CV's arranged.
I loved the Ending! 😊
A kiss on the forehead was fine but I expected something more, you know 😉

Do write more on ZaYa 👍🏼


Sorry if I let you down, just wanted to make it mild. 😆

But thanks a lot, glad you that you liked it. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
its so beautiful update.u write in a way that i can't imagen every scene.i wish that happen in their real date.keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
WOW!!
You're an awesome writer!This date was beautiful :*
Im awed, really! Your writing...u made zaya look so cute..their fighting, boredom,jealousy and then part 2 :D
Altho i really wanted a lil more dan a forehead kiss...maybe an I love you, if not a kiss :P
But the 'shayad' was a lovely ending!
AWESOME!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
^thank you so much guys 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Beautifully worded. Enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
i cant believe i havebonly just come across this
amazing ts
loved it
lil emotional aswel
write more soon
and please pm me when u write again
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