So finally Jalal made his entry...π₯³ Lovely update dear please do continue soon...yeah Precap se kaam nahin chalega...π€
Yes he didπ
Thanks for liking and commenting dearπ
Next week tak to precap se hi kaam chalana padegaπ³
So finally Jalal made his entry...π₯³ Lovely update dear please do continue soon...yeah Precap se kaam nahin chalega...π€
Will comment soon, but plz di, bhagwan ke liye next tym voh bright neon green colour se mat likhna π€
Originally posted by: shahbhavini
<font color="#006600" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hi entire chapter was awesome... U know Preet what I love about your writing... you put every scene in detail... I love the part you have mentioned about slip... it shows how Jodha's character is... the way she instruct masterji... She is very decent girl... and I was very surprise with she picked computer instead Math... her teacher is very dominating... she gave and took computer science... vow... I think her destiny is waiting for her their... Jodha bang with handsome dude... must be Jalal... can't wait for more... update soon
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Originally posted by: Pals2411
Lovely update Preet...π...You give a detailed writing (whichI like)... I can literally visualize the goings on clearly...Be it teacher telling Jodha to take another subject with Commerce and why soOR the talk that Jodha has with her Masterji (tailor) and the reasons she thinks about the white uniform...I loved those parts...Finally she collidesπ...Someone looking at her while she is least bothered.π...Chalo next part I think Jallu and Jo ka ek frame mein saath hogaπ...Great going buddy...Update soon and do PMπ
PS: One request buddy, as far as possible avoidneon green...Padne mein difficulty hoti hai, especially when there are 4-5 lines to readπ
Originally posted by: SARA4444
<font size="3">amazingg chapter</font>
<font size="3">please pm me if possible</font>
Originally posted by: Pallavvi
wow...very nice concept preet...
so Jo is in eleventh standard now...and she has to choose CS instead of maths...are jallu ko jo milna tha...and u said its based on true story...if i m guessing it right...teri love story to nahi hai na ye??πawesome writing...continue soon dearπ
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