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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Nishtha

So finally Jalal made his entry...πŸ₯³ Lovely update dear please do continue soon...yeah Precap se kaam nahin chalega...πŸ€—



Yes he didπŸ˜†
Thanks for liking and commenting dearπŸ˜ƒ
Next week tak to precap se hi kaam chalana padega😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: pupumon

Will comment soon, but plz di, bhagwan ke liye next tym voh bright neon green colour se mat likhna πŸ€“



Still waiting for ur comment Popo😭
Bhagwan ke liye nahin tere liye maine neon green change kar diyaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73


Thanks NajmaπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

<font color="#006600" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hi entire chapter was awesome... U know Preet what I love about your writing... you put every scene in detail... I love the part you have mentioned about slip... it shows how Jodha's character is... the way she instruct masterji... She is very decent girl... and I was very surprise with she picked computer instead Math... her teacher is very dominating... she gave and took computer science... vow... I think her destiny is waiting for her their... Jodha bang with handsome dude... must be Jalal... can't wait for more... update soon
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Thanks a lot Bhavini πŸ˜ƒ i have learned to write from reading all the wonder writers in the Forum only, so big thanks to u guys πŸ˜ƒ
I like how u all r noticing the details and loving it 😳
Yea u r right her destiny is waiting there, u will c in later chapters y i have focused a lot on this issue! Its like she says EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON, so stay tuned for more 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
wow...very nice concept preet...
so Jo is in eleventh standard now...
and she has to choose CS instead of maths...
are jallu ko jo milna tha...
and u said its based on true story...
if i m guessing it right...
teri love story to nahi hai na ye?? πŸ˜‰
awesome writing...continue soon dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Lovely update Preet...πŸ˜ƒ...You give a detailed writing (whichI like)... I can literally visualize the goings on clearly...Be it teacher telling Jodha to take another subject with Commerce and why soOR the talk that Jodha has with her Masterji (tailor) and the reasons she thinks about the white uniform...I loved those parts...Finally she collidesπŸ˜†...Someone looking at her while she is least bothered.πŸ˜‰...Chalo next part I think Jallu and Jo ka ek frame mein saath hogaπŸ˜‰...Great going buddy...Update soon and do PMπŸ˜ƒ


PS: One request buddy, as far as possible avoidneon green...Padne mein difficulty hoti hai, especially when there are 4-5 lines to readπŸ˜›



Thanks dear for liking and i m so glad u r enjoying the story πŸ˜ƒ
Will update next week!!
I have already changed the color and will remember not to use it in future 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
interesting FF
plz pm me when u update
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SARA4444

<font size="3">amazingg chapter</font>

<font size="3">please pm me if possible</font>


Thanks dear 😊
Add me to ur buddy list for pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pallavvi

wow...very nice concept preet...

so Jo is in eleventh standard now...
and she has to choose CS instead of maths...
are jallu ko jo milna tha...
and u said its based on true story...
if i m guessing it right...
teri love story to nahi hai na ye??πŸ˜‰
awesome writing...continue soon dear😊



Thanks for liking the story Pallavi πŸ˜ƒ
Yes u r right she changed subject as Jallu is waiting there for her 😳
Well the story is BASED on a true story but has fiction added as welll, based being the operative word here... πŸ˜‰
As for who's story it is, thats for me to know and u to guess πŸ˜‰
Will update soon!!
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