Lovely update Preet...๐...You give a detailed writing (which I like)... I can literally visualize the goings on clearly...Be it teacher telling Jodha to take another subject with Commerce and why so OR the talk that Jodha has with her Masterji (tailor) and the reasons she thinks about the white uniform...I loved those parts...Finally she collides๐...Someone looking at her while she is least bothered.๐...Chalo next part I think Jallu and Jo ka ek frame mein saath hoga๐...Great going buddy...Update soon and do PM๐
PS: One request buddy, as far as possible avoid neon green...Padne mein difficulty hoti hai, especially when there are 4-5 lines to read๐
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