Originally posted by: shahbhavini
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Vow!!! I loved this chapter so much... Wonderful... I read entire chapter in one breath... This chapter was routing story progress but the way you have written Preet I was completly lost in it... Everything was happening in front of my eyes..Awww reallyπ³π³ Wow
Suku Darling because of you my Jo is in trouble and doing so much extra work math teacher...Hmm...π
Interesting ... Jalal notice her nervousness from first day... I never thought teacher at home think about student... but really interesting... He remember her innocent smile... Vow...How do u know they dont think about students at home?ππ
Little by little she is getting comfortable in the class but still she is not talking to him directly... even after many months... I think I was wrong she is more nervous than attracted... She does have attraction little bit that is the reason she is acting different... but she is very much nervous...Yes u r right, attraction is way less than nervousness...for nowπ³You have written both of her emotion beautifully...Thank uπ
I see on Jalal side more attraction...Hmm not so much yet...ok, may b more than Jodha perhaps!as a teacher he is concern for her different behavior... I think he likes her innocent smile from day one... otherwise he would never notice her nervousness...Yes he wud have never noticed her nervousness if he hadn't met her the first dayπ
Tuff exam... ohhh... poor Jodha is worried... pass kar dena use... Preet... apne ghar ki bachhi haiπ
ππ Ok sure!
Preet U R amazing writerπππThank u sooo much, this coming from u means a lotππU R writing is simple and very effective... loved it...Thank u so much for ur encouraging wordsπ³π³Update soon please...π
Will tryππ
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Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
very nice update continue soon.. & do PM
Originally posted by: shahbhavini
I have updated comment... PREET SUPERB UPDATE
luvly updateπ...nw m also xited fr jo's result nd the changes dat wud take place after the resultsπupdate soon dear...nd thnx fr de pm...
Originally posted by: aisha...11110
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">just luved it...awesooommmeeeππ</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">hope jodha will get gud marks...π</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">jalal thinking of jodha...kuch toh gadbad haiπ</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">thnx 4 pm...update jaldi chahiyeππ</font>
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