OMG! I was giggling the whole time i was reading it (the whole SS)
Ch 1:At first he was in denial (which btw sucks, but only for the one who goes through it, others enjoy it,) then he finally admitted to himself - a huge thing - that he felt something for her, something that was not hatred, nor pity, something entirely different (oh thank God) but all he could admit, that too to only himself, was that it was immense attraction (bus?! Dude u love her, accept it) all my excitement went down the bawadi! Well, not all exactly, at least he accepted this much, and he longed for her. So, I'm happy π
That 'kiss her' part had me drooling π
Suraiya seems surprisingly nice
Or issko apne looks pr kuch zada he yakeen nhi hai? Overconfidence ki dukaan π
Yeh singapore say koi gift laaya Aaliya k liye?
Somethings are better left to imagination! I say, laya tha, confession k baad dayga
Ab waiting to find out what he does, or says when he sees her! *butterflies*
Ch 2:
Aww.. She knows his touch, i might just cry, ok enough of my melodrama, but that's real love, actually beyond, that's infinite real love, thus the title π
Haha dedh inch lambi naak π... Btw that was red + golden
Rehaan yaha bhi?! gadha kahi ka, har jaga poch jata hai, uninvited! Q sukoon nhi lene deta yeh bunda humay π‘
But acha Zain jalo, jitn jalogay otna jaldi confess karogay
No he actually is a psycho, thanks sanika for pointing that out
"Agar itna hi baat karna tha toh call kar lete" she shot back furiously.
"Tum bhi toh kar sakti thi." He shot back, equally furious.
I was wondering k yeh kb aayega π
"Yes, me again! You want to talk to her. To touch her. To hug her. To ki-"
I seriously laughed like Shazia just now - look Sanika what u're making us do!
Hahaha rehaan raakshas, rehaan psycho, good good sanika, love you for this <3
Aaliya ka fb MKB hoga na?
Yeh raaz, raaz he rahega ab
Chaand bibi bhi na, wrong timing!
Hmm sleeping diagonally, acha bachu, taake Aaliya olti nhi soye, haina?
The last part, i was just aww-ing
It was beautiful
Ch 3:
Pagal Aaliya, soyi rehti, itnay close tha Zain, enjoy krti thora
That IS so not fair! Even i can't raise only one browπ
Zain told her that he missed her, yayyy! Later he changed that to kitkit, but first he said 'you' she reciprocated, saying, "I missed us too." Aren't these two simply adorable π (hai me mar jawa)
Aww... Jal kookra zainoo is so cute
Their mumbai darshan, their questions, the thank you part, the rikhaw ride, everything was so beautiful, so meaningful, they learned a lot today, about each other, about themselves, about them - their relationship, it was perfect π
That is when she realised. Her heart had melted for him a little. She had fallen for him a little.
My favorite line from the narrator, i.e. you
Ch 4:
Iss chapter k baaray may may kya bolo, it was hot, it was intense, it was just amazing!
Wow! Never ever in my wildest dream did i think that Aaliya would initiate the kiss, that too like this! *Oye ballay ballay, oye shaawa shawaa (x2)*
W8... Kiss krtay waqt teeth band kese rehte hai? π i guess shouldn't be asking this, I'll probably have to find out after i get married
Barkat jaa nhi skti thi, baad may aajati π‘
Zain nay finally ending bata kr he dum liyaπ... Lol
Ch 5:
Ma'am u are not writing crap, oh no! So never ever think that again, got it?
Rizwaan was at the door and he stood their with an baffled,a piece of uneaten sandwich between his mouth.
π€£π€£If it was not her sister, i bet he would have thought it was hot π€£π€£
"Bro,i didn't know that bhabhi bats for the other team,if you know what i mean;)"
π€£
"I did not know that you were a lesbian. Agar ladkiyan pasand thi toh mujhe phasane ki kya zarurat thi?;)"-Z
π€£ yaar it's 1:07 in the morning, and I'm laughing like a maniac
besides you should know which team I bat for after this morning's incident, no?"-A
I'm loving this bold Aaliya π π
"Well,your moans this morn said otherwise,no?"-Z
Yeh maara... Yeh maar chauka... Yeah maara chakka
I loved it... would be an understatement!
Can't wait for the party, and the much awaited CONFESSION
Too bad! I was gonna throw chocolates at u, now that u can't receive, I'm just just gonna have to eat them all by myself :p
Ch 6:
Do i reaaly need to comment on how good it was?!
I love your work Sanika, keep writing, and pm me when you do :)
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