SS : Jab Se Tere Naina! Part 14 on Page 34! Up on 9th Sept! - Page 7

Originally posted by: divikash

loved it yaar,too good, tell me somethin

did u write this story for some1 else, coz ther s khushi and geet instead of aaliya

but either way loved the entire update

update next part soon as this

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Telugu? Cool!

Uh oh! 😆😳That was not editing mistake! That was all thanks to exhaustion! Today Many places I typed Geet in place of Khushi and while writing MG version I wrote Aaliya once too! Today had gone out in noon in heat and that made me feel very tired and that created these problems!😆

Originally posted by: vinu127

take rest di...don't strain yourself too much...

hume advice karte hai rest and breaks leneko par khud nahi leli...bad!*pouts*

pls take care...

ur readers are very eager to read ur updates as soon as possible but not at the cost of ur health or exhaustion... pls take care..

p.s.my review has been put up😊

Amazing
Seems like zain plan is working in full mode
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

What an Uodate man zain really does plan out every little detail I loved his overall plan but the plan within a plan of talking and to tak get her angry to get her angry makes her drop the flowers and the countdowns amazing loved it I can imagine his signature walk and even Allah gave his blessings loved how he's always reevaluating his plans and the he's seeing aliya so close but realises she's uncomfortable so starts with his sarcastic comments like do you plan to get up it was truly hilarious and when he said something which finaly brought the inner tigress out man he's impressed hahaha but as soon as surraiya come so he's hiding like a cat and then ready to pounce she crashes into him again hahahah and this time she doesn't even wait for him to talk she's roaring to go hahaha amazing :) can't wait for the next oart :) thansk for the pm :)

Promise to God I'll edit this today. Hehe.

absolutely brilliant

It was so good, and thanks for the pm

Hey Brilliant update. Loved part 2 and 3. Looking forward to reading more.

Sorry dear for late comments. But AD is currently very hectic...

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Of course I missed your review! Kept on wondering where were you! Then remembered you had exams so did not PM you! Or else would have bombarded you with PMs asking whether you are alright or not!

It is OK! Hota hai! Koi nahi! Saw you online! Maybe the next update will have you as the first reader!😉😃

Oh yaar! Not fair! That was total cruelty! And I can understand what you are feeling coz many times even I have faced such problems right when something good was about to happen!😡

😆

Really? You could? Awesome!😃

You could imagine that too? Wow!😃 The best compliment anyone could give me!😃

Oh you will defo have them! His reactions will have lots of protests and drama from his side!😆

😲 Seriously??? Now I am feeling a bit emotional! Thank you!

Hey! It is Ok! Atleast you reviewed! That is enough for me!😃

DONT YOU DARE SKIP THEM!!!!😡 This update will be here only but the study days will never come back! Study hard. remain calm, keep smiling and come here and read stories when you want a break from studies! They are best stress busters!😃 BTW, what are you studying?

NO probs! Aaraam se padhna! Will wait for your reviews! Take care!

Kalpana