Originally posted by: ZaYaFan1
Pehle tou I'd like to thank you for the PM! So sweet of you to do this everytime 😃 Thi chapter is fantastic! I was so shocked when I read that part that Aaliya dragged him to the dance floor and began dancing with him but thank god it turned out to be his daydream or 'khush Fehmi' 😛 Zain Abdullah tou gaye 😛 He has actually fallen for his cousin 😉 WOW! Kalpana thank you for writing such an awesome chapter! I'm sure I'm going to enjoy this series as much as I did the previous one! 😊 You made my day! But Ab I'll find it difficult to prepare for my Geography exam 😭 You're very 'zaalim' 😛 Haha! Still I loved it! And now waiting to read how he planned eveything ... Mastermind Zaalim Abdullah 😳 But take rest! Do not hurry or anything because pain in your hands might increase 😊 THANK YOU for Dh Dh series! 😃
This was just amazing... at loss of words👏
Among all ZaYa works I have read till now, this is the first one where Zain falls in love at first sight and its so nice to read n imagine that..thanks to ur style icould imagine every second of their 1st meeting(all in slow motion that too😉).. esp loved how u expressed Zains jealousy over how his bro was getting all attention from aliya but not him...
"Aaliya danced in front of him all the while smiling at him.
She narrowed her eyes when she noticed that Zain was not dancing.
She grabbed his hands and placed one on her waist and other in her hand."
a "WHAT!!!😕"! just slipped from my mouth when i read this!
and Zain is a real smarty! despite being in a 'aliya trance' he managed to get a buy-able answer... 👍🏼
now i'm really craving for part 2... thanq for the PM
Finally the wait is over...
and this update was also as beautiful as ever!
the way Zain's feelings were explained in the first part was just awww...types
hmmm...cool dude banne ka bada shok hai iss bande ko!na bhai ko help kiya na khud ko(in meeting aliya) aur mummy dearest ne itna accha mauka diya toh bhi itni tewar😡😆lol...but dats y i'm loving him may be😳
aur iss super cool dude ko kitna sataya uske MKB ne😆😆bechare hi halat math poocho!ek toh itna bawli ho raha hai us keliye par dikha nahi sakta..upar se yeh bewajah usse dar rahi hai...how sad!n finally Aayat turns Cupid!dediya use sabse Zaroori information👍🏼and then Zain ki dimaag ki batti jali!so thats when woh dhoom dhadaka ka grand opening hua...srsly what an apt title..👏
loving this one..❤️
waiting for the next update-ur reader😊
Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer
Thank you!😃Feel so happy to read that!😃Thank you!😃 Glad you liked the title Dhhoom Dhadakka!😃Thanks for such an awesome review! Made my day when I read it today morning, Was grinning for whole one hour. 😃
Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
Zain is dying to spend some time with Aliya who is adamant to ignore him. But Zain is very lucky, he always get the solution of his every problem and this time ayat help him to gave him a hint to grab Aliya attention.I am eager to know how will zain put the 'anger' factor in his plan to converse with Aliya.
Originally posted by: Sweta...
What an Uodate loved it :) loved how zain ticked surraiya to keep his cool image as well as take the haldi to see aliya hahahaha and the fact he snooped all day to see her but failed and saw her in the evening suring the sangeet and figured out she's scared was sooo funny like how is he meant to talk if she runs away from him hahaha and talking to aayat funny she didn't pick up anything weird from zain enquiring.. Man he's clever I'm guessing he's going to get her angry next to Start the conversations hahah :) great Uodate thansk for the pm can't wait for the next part :)
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