Originally posted by: -TheInstigator-
OMG! Amazing Update !
Fahad is so funny! 😆😆
Zain nd his khurafati dimaag..Hamesha kuch na kuch naya hota hai 😉
Plz Cont Soon 😊
Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA
it was awesome!!!👏
beautifully written
loved it.. ❤️
waiting for d next part..
PART 14. EPILOGUE - 5 YEARS LATER
"Aur is tarah, meri Shehzaadi, maine apne shaatir dimaag se tumhari ammi ko mere ghar tak hi nahi mere Office, Barkat Royale, tak bhi pahuncha diya. Aur phir jo hua woh...", Zain trailed off as he noticed Zariya asleep in his arms. He smiled softly and continued, "Woh story shaayad main tumhein phir kabhi sunaaunga!" He placed the child in the bassinet. "Jab tum jaag rahi hogi tab!", Zain spoke with a whisper.
It was the morning after Zain and Aaliya's Wedding Anniversary. Zain had just gotten out of their room to go for a swim when he had heard Zariya crying. He had gone to her room wondering whether he needed to wake Aaliya up to feed Zariya. But when he entered Zariya's room and picked up the child, he realised that she just needed her diaper changed. But as Zariya continued to cry even after she was changed, Zain decided to tell her a story hoping that listening to his soothing voice might calm her down. Unable to think of any story right away, he decided to continue the story Aaliya was narrating the night before. He started with the aftermath of Fahad and Nafisa's wedding and had just reached till Aaliya's job offer acceptance when Zariya fell asleep. He smiled and placed a kiss on his child. Tum harqaton mein bhale hi mere jaisi ho, par dikhti bilkul meri Aaliya jaisi ho! Zain aur Aaliya ki perfect mix, humaari Zariya! He thought fondly as he brushed the kid's forehead lovingly.
What Zain did not know was that Aaliya had woken up hearing Zariya cry. She was about to enter Zariya's room when she heard Zain talking to the child and she stilled as she realised that Zain was narrating their story to Zariya. As she heard the story from his point of view, she smiled softly at some points and at some points she cried too. But as she heard the way she got her job, she started getting angry. She was fuming by the time Zain decided to get out of the room. She hid in the nearby room as Zain got out and went for his jogging. After few minutes, she got out of the room and entered Zariya's room.
As soon as she entered Zariya's room she started pacing to and fro in anger. "Ya Allah! Kaisa insaan hai yeh! Kabhi itne pyaar se raat ko chai laata hai! Toh kabhi College chodte waqt ladta hai! Kabhi mere sapnon ke liye apne sapnon ki qurbaani deta hai toh kabhi..." She trailed off in anger as she fidgeted with her duppatta.
As Aaliya looked at the swaying bassinet, she continued with her rant, "Pata hai Zariya, kabhi dil karta hai tumhaare papa ko gale se laga loon toh kabhi lagta hai uska gala hi daba doon! Main tumhaare papa se isliye naaraaz nahi hoon ki usne mere sapnon ko apne pyaar aur parivaar ke aage rakha! Main toh bas...", she trailed off as she sat on the nearby rocking chair.
"Main toh bas isliye naaraaz hoon kyunki mujhe laga tha ki Fahad Bhai ne mujhe Accountant ki post mere kaabiliyat ki wajah se diya! Ab pata chala ki sab kuch ek plan ki wajah se hua! Zain ke plan ki wajah se hua!", she huffed angrily. "Pata hai Zariya, tumhaare papa ne na mujhe bahut sataaya! Shaadi ke pehle bhi aur shaadi ke baad bhi, aur yeh sab sirf uss stupid image ke liye! Uske stupid ego ke liye! Saaf saaf seedhe shabdon mein apne feelings bayaan kardeta toh iska kya jaata? Itne games khelne ki kya jaroorat hai? Zaalim kahin ka!", Aaliya ranted in anger. Then she looked at the swaying bassinet. Yeh Zariya aawaaz kyun nahi kar rahi? Har waqt meri aawaaz sunte hi hasne lagti hai? Ab kyun nahi has rahi? She got up from the chair and walked over to the bassinet still talking away, "Ab tum soch rahi hogi ki aise Zaalim se mujhe pyaar kaise hua? Woh hua yun ki...", she trailed off as she finally reached the bassinet and noticed Zariya sleeping. She huffed and chuckled, "Ab jo hua woh main tumhein tumhare papa ke Office jaane ke baad bataaungi! Abhi tum soti raho aur main jaake tayyaar hoti hoon aur jaake uss Zaalim Usman Abdullah ke liye naashta banaati hoon!"
Aaliya stormed off to the kitchen all the while muttering about prankster fellows who preferred to play all types of games instead of simply confessing their love.
THE END
You guys must be so surprised by the sudden epilogue right? But kya karun?
I had planned Dhoom Dhadakka to have Aaliya's point of view and Jab Se to have Zain's point of view. But it was only now I realised that as Aaliya was supposed to fall in love during KC to marriage journey.
And for that I would need to write it in Aaliya's point of view.
So I broke Jab Se's story into two and put a break here!
The next story will have Aaliya's point of view and her falling in love with Zain and how they get married!
So from now on, this series has five stories!
First was Dhoom Dhadakka
Second is Jab Se Tere Naina
Third will be Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse
Fourth will be Yeh Kya Hogaya (working title)
And finally we will have Band Baaja and Zain!
Sorry for any inconvenience!
Also next story in this series will start after three weeks!
Sorry for the delay people but I want to reply all the reviews for Jab Se and go through all your suggestions before starting the next story!
This also means you can drop in your thoughts for the next story!
So go on and type away!
Thanks, take care and have fun,
Kalpana
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