SS : Jab Se Tere Naina! Part 14 on Page 34! Up on 9th Sept! - Page 2

Awesome update. Was laughing like anything on his excuse to his mom ... Party 😆

Awesome update

Amazing
Zain daydreaming and mom caught him
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

amazing update!

What an amazing start to jab se tera naina and I loved the inclusion of the song in the Uodate loved how detailed it all was and was so easy to imagine... Loved the way she walked past him and smiled at zain and zains jealousy ufff loved how he reminded himself fahad loves nafisa and when he's staring at her whiles she's making fahad sing and everyone dance and she sees him them widens her eyes and looks away to notice he's staring at her and when she pulled zain to dance I though man she's courageous the guy that's checking her out she tells him to dance and when she sees he's not she puts his hand on her waist and sway together I'm like :so whattt?? And then suraiyas taps zains shoulder and I'm like I should've seen it he was imagining it Hahahha and zains frustration was hilarious!! Great update :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

absolutely brilliant

Great job! 👍🏼 Looking forward to rest

Pehle tou I'd like to thank you for the PM! So sweet of you to do this everytime 😃 Thi chapter is fantastic! I was so shocked when I read that part that Aaliya dragged him to the dance floor and began dancing with him but thank god it turned out to be his daydream or 'khush Fehmi' 😛 Zain Abdullah tou gaye 😛 He has actually fallen for his cousin 😉 WOW! Kalpana thank you for writing such an awesome chapter! I'm sure I'm going to enjoy this series as much as I did the previous one! 😊 You made my day! But Ab I'll find it difficult to prepare for my Geography exam 😭 You're very 'zaalim' 😛 Haha! Still I loved it! And now waiting to read how he planned eveything ... Mastermind Zaalim Abdullah 😳 But take rest! Do not hurry or anything because pain in your hands might increase 😊 THANK YOU for Dh Dh series! 😃

This was just amazing... at loss of words👏

Among all ZaYa works I have read till now, this is the first one where Zain falls in love at first sight and its so nice to read n imagine that..thanks to ur style icould imagine every second of their 1st meeting(all in slow motion that too😉).. esp loved how u expressed Zains jealousy over how his bro was getting all attention from aliya but not him...

"Aaliya danced in front of him all the while smiling at him.

She narrowed her eyes when she noticed that Zain was not dancing.

She grabbed his hands and placed one on her waist and other in her hand."

a "WHAT!!!😕"! just slipped from my mouth when i read this!

and Zain is a real smarty! despite being in a 'aliya trance' he managed to get a buy-able answer... 👍🏼

now i'm really craving for part 2... thanq for the PM

awesome update.
Zain was head over heel for Aliya at first side that he start day dreaming about her.waiting for next part.