Res... Too sleepy right now π
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I'm so sorry for editing my comment this late π Anyway, leave all the bakwas π I'm directly coming to the review! π
You don't know how much i loved their conversation at night! oh my.. these two β€οΈ Zain is such a nice guy π I loved his bhashan about neend π Well that scene truly touched my heart you know π³ I will dance when these two will get married in your SS and yes moon ne tou in dono ki convo pe chaar chand laga diye π I loved this to bitss <3 ! And yess the way you described aaliy's beauty from Zain's POV when she was sitting at the window pane was truly commendable.. nothing can be better than this ππΌ\
Hahah! Aaliya kitna darti hai Mr Zaalim sey π Ab agey bhi bolo gi ya nahi π He gets annoyed when she does this π Surayya Aunty ke liye tou mai clapping karney wali thi but .. your that last pat about Zain's planning made me stop π Mai otu fida ho gayi hun Zain ki smirk pe.. and his plans to.. his ideas too.. his missions too.. lol actually I'm just loving this Zain β€οΈ
haha! Zain billi nahi billa hai π he's mastermind, i tell you π hahah Zain's dialogues towards his bhabi were so damn good! π ahha... a good tshirt! phir se self conscious and worried about his image π
Tum mujhay ullu bana rhia ho? lol! jo ullu ho usay batay nahi hain ... mai tumhari rag ragg se waqif hun.. oh my.. i loved this line.. β€οΈ Yes.. Zain Abdullah you know herr π³ Their lovetsory is making me crazyyy π
After such a long time you updated and this time the update too was pretty long π Thank you Kalpana for this β€οΈ You are a brilliant writer.. ππΌ I loved that moon convo so much... telling it to you again though π Your writing style too is just amazingg ! π Thanks for the PM! π Waiting for the next part! and yeah sorry once again for commenting this late .. okay? π This chapter was awesome! π
Edited by ZaYaFan1 - 10 years ago
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