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Posted: 10 years ago
This Uodate was the bestestestest yes I have made it up but the joy I got from reading your update it deserves it :D I just loved the way zain was so desperate to talk for aliya and their phone conversation was just hilarious I loved it!!! And the way he kept calling and tried to get her to argue and when it was the limit she got gulam on the phone was hilarious I actually did a :O lmfao expression! And then zain plotting to bring aliya to Mumbai was epic I just love the way his brain works turning every situation to his advantage! It was a really joyful Uodate :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)
And yesss im first to comment again :D I feel priveledged hahahahah!!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Zain is suffering from loveria, he is frustrated because he can't think anyone except Aliya, well it's pyaar and it's sweet anjaam.
LOLZ Zain was scolded by Aliya's father, she really caught him well. LOLZ
Zain is very smart, he cleverly took out important information about Aliya and used for his benefit. He can brilliantly manipulate others and turn tables in his favor.
Now Aliya is doing to live is his house, just like he wanted without getting himself being notice that he was actually the master planner.
I think Laiya will study in his college too.
Let the fun begin.
I am eagerly waiting for cute fight parts in next chapters.
Can't wait to read next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
yay zains plan worked
awesome update
totally brilliant
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Wonderful update

Zain is suffering from loveria, he is frustrated because he can't think anyone except Aliya, well it's pyaar and it's sweet anjaam.
LOLZ Zain was scolded by Aliya's father, she really caught him well. LOLZ
Zain is very smart, he cleverly took out important information about Aliya and used for his benefit. He can brilliantly manipulate others and turn tables in his favor.
Now Aliya is doing to live is his house, just like he wanted without getting himself being notice that he was actually the master planner.
I think Laiya will study in his college too.
Let the fun begin.
I am eagerly waiting for cute fight parts in next chapters.
Can't wait to read next chapter.


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update, I loved it and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
i totally agree with javeria, he's got loveria
its highly spreading in his body, and contagious which might soon affect aaliya when she comes to mumbaiπŸ€£πŸ˜‰

lovely piece of work...too cute and adorable to be honest🀣😳
he the impatient zain and pranky aaliya...muah to them

and this is for you πŸ€—

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.zain was mad,finally he was successful to bring aliya mumbai.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great one :D
can't wait to see their fights :P
update soon and pm me please :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

It is ok dear! I was planning to update around 10 itself but stupid light! And I dont mind if you dont review today itself! Your reviews are so refreshing that I am ready to wait for a day for them!

awww... thank u di for understanding so much...πŸ€—

part 6

all new..

nothing known in priorπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

superb! thoroughly enjoyed it!

review in orderπŸ˜‰:

i loved this side of Zain.. a prankster but not ullu ka phatta!πŸ˜› Final year hai.. he gotta concentrate! and hamari Aliya ji hai ki inhen chain se boring lectures bhi sunne nahi deti!πŸ₯± totally occupy kar diya hai Zain ki mind ko! abb jaadu tona ka baath Zain ki mind me toh aana hi tha! are bhopali ladki hai! koi bharosa nahi!πŸ˜†

but he was biting his nails?🀣🀣🀣🀣OMG harsh doing it will be a treat to watch!

he had missed that sweet voice of hers... aww zainu.. thoda intezaar karo..phir din bhar usi ka awaaj sunte rehna!😳

Aliya's voice was equally soft! hmmm... aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai!errrmmm... may be not..Zain ki taraf thoda sa.. itttu sa Zyaada lagi hai!πŸ˜‰

Zain sach me phattu hai!

khud call kiya aur keh raha hai 'bolo aliya'...aur phir bina head or tail ke bol ta hai 'fight with me'!mera chain-o-araam wapis karo!🀒

Then obviously Sherni Aliya ko toh take over karna hi tha na!

Zain ko doctor appointment bhi dilado Aliya...

Or actually..i'll get it.. the best brain care n mental hospital in south india is the campus right after my college campus! Roz tumhara dekhbaal main hi karlungi..............*eh.. ok let me come out of my dream world and type the review!*

Aur agar sherni hai Aliya toh Zain bhi sher hai!😎

Phirse call kiya!aise kaise chodta Aliya ko? No ways!

Par Aliya bhi kitni irritation sahegi! Kardi apni Zindagi ki The best galti!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Phone apni abbu ko dediya!

Aur phir baja Zain ki band!

*oh meri jaan oh meri jaan

mereko majnu banakar

kaha chal di kaha chal di

pyaar ki pungi bajakar!*

par Zain ki dimaag ki batti badi jaldi jal gayi!πŸ€“

Aliya ka poora plan jhat me samaj me aagaya!

Kuch bhi kaho! Zain phattu hai par dimaag ka bada hi tez hai!😎

Zain ka badla!eeekkksss can't wait!*starts jumping like a chimpu*

Chudails hai hum log! Hero badla lena chahtahai n we r on cloud 9!

Kyunki Zain ka badla kaise hoga yeh toh hum jaante hai!πŸ₯³

Get her to Mumbai!

Kaise-pehle call ur private lady cupid!

cupid in diapers ka kaam toh chapter 1 me hogaya when zain saw her! Abb sirf Lady cupid ka kaam hai!

Indirectly direct wish mango after thodasa beating around the bush!

And lo cupid ne kaha "tathastu"

Phirse dediya the most important information!

Abb jab manzil pata chal gaya toh rasta banan Zain acche se jaante hai!

And bechali lady cupid!

Jeeju.. I mean apni bhaijaan ki chaal who seedi ladki kahan se samjhe!

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

"Aapi aur main bahut lucky hain ki aap hum dono ki itni care karte hain!"

@brown: I was ROFLing when I read this!

Zain ko sirf apni padi hai beta!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Phir Aliya keliye zain sniper bhi ban gaya!poor him!

Par chalo Aliya is coming to Mumbai!

I'm waiting for the love story to begin! 😳

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

"Tumhein kya lagta hai? Tum Bhopal se Mumbai, Mumbai se Barkat Royale aur Barkat Royale se mere kamre tak as my wife aise hi aayi ho? It was all planned!"

@ pink-ticked!

now besabri se waiting for rest... will all this happen in JSTN??? Coz u said that Dh Dh is of 4 parts n JSTN is part 2!

However it is.. I'm too excited for Aliya and zain to be under one roof now!

Thank u so much for such a wonderful chapter...

Will be waiting for next

p.s. DFL progress: thread 3 me 15 chapters up... will be catching up the rest soon n will come to ur current pace! As I expected, Geet forgot the 2 months! Will she ever remember it??(don't answer)hope La n NK settle together... anyways I had slapped all 3 main characters(except geet) in my dreams! Saar eke saare raita phehlaane me lage hue hai!Kanha's name is so cute... so is he n his mumma and mashi n maamus!will catch up as soon as possible!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Story :)
Plz Cont Soon..:)

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