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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 4. honeymoon
zain where all set to leave for honeymoon they were doing last minute packing they hear a knock "aaliya mein andar aao?" asked usman .. "mamu aaye na" "packing done" inquired usaman "ha dad"zain replied and looked at aaliya in a naughty manner usman coughed and said "i am sorry i have decided to make a little change in ur plan u ppl arent going to shimla instead u are going to nanital ... its the place where i and surriya begum had gone for honeymoon so i want u ppl to go there tickets are done and ha aur ek baat wah mein barkat royale ki aur ek hotel banvayi yeh mere siva koi nahi janta hai . maine chata hu ki zain tum woh hotel ki kaam bhi dekh lo ek baar ... hope u ppl understand my feelings and why i am sending u its absolutely beautiful place...""mamu hum zaroor jayenge .hai na zain "asked aaliya "ha ofcourse dad ..and how romantic'."but this will remain secret between we three get my point "said usman "yes"both zain amd aaliya replied with a smile. now get ready u have flight and then have booked tickets in a train from delhi i hope zain tumhe train mein travel karne me koi problem nahi hai kyunki main chata hu ki jaise hum honeymoon pe gaye waise hee tum log jao .. and udhar barkat royale mein honeymoom suit bhi book ho gaya hai ..." "dad its all k jab tak aaliya is there with me" and he hugs aaliya from back and aaliya hits him with the elbow and breaks the hug 'ji mamu sab chalenga hum neeche aate hai tyaar hoke" usman leaves the room.
AFTER 1 HOUR
in the livinv room they all told aLiya Nd zain bye.next morning they reached nanital it was a very beautiful place a beatiful lake between a beautiful range of mountains and full greenary the winds were whostling the lale had beautiful turbulent waves and the climate was very pleasant . they reached barkat. royale .zain wispered in aaliyas ears "mkb ready ho na for the best ever time "and bit her ears ... "zain" moaned aaliya and left the car ran into barkat it was very beautiful hotel with an indian touch she just coudnt stop staring at the hotel "kya hua " zain asked her with snap in front of her face .. "zain its just so beautiful" and hugged zain "mkb chale room mein i cant wait nemore.." and pulled her . They reached the room " zain chalo tum fresh hoke aao.. then hum sightseeing ke liye jaate hai .." zain went itno the bathroom he asked aaliya for towel aaliya went to give and was pulled in the bathroom" zain pls chodo"zain turned om the shower both of them got wet and zain said in his husky voice "aaj no sightseeing aaj nly u and me". next morning aaliya got up ...Ans saw zain sleeping and wearing no shirt she slept on his back and wispered in his ears "zain" zain replied huskily "ummm mamu ki bjanji sone do" "get up Aaj hum sightseeing karne jana hai" said aaliya shaking zain to wake up .zain rolled and came in aaliya and placed a kiss on her cheeks And said' no sightingseeing nly u ... "aaliya pulled zain towards her Amd gave him a kiss . "plz pls "said aaliya and made a face like a girl wanting icecream"Acha baba chalo chale par raat Ko "and zain move towards her neck "zain"aaliya pushed him "get ready".
SIGHTSEEING DAY
Zain and aaliya went to tiffins point which is knwn for its beautiful view they could see a beautiful lake And the whole nanital ... zain hugged aaliya from behind and started placing kisses all over her neck .. "zain pls log dekh rahe hai" said aaliya shoving him back .. "nahi Chodunga" zain said romantically still kissing aaliya. "zain pls "and gets angry"kahi bhi shuru ho jaate ho mujhe aacha nahi lagta"and walks away. After that zain tried talking to her but she didn't respond . At next point .. Zain tried convincing aalIya she didn't get convinced ...zain warned"agar tum nahi manogi Toh mein yaha se kud jaounga.. I swear I will jump from here aaliya ""jo karna hai karo I don't care" said aaliya angrily ...she walked away she thought zain was joking and would could come running behind her ... "after 10 minutes waiting for zain in car she was worried she got out car and started finding zain she started crying And was shouting "zaaainnn ..zaain .."and. was weeping heavily ..she felt someones hand on her shoulder she turned and saw zain she hugged him tightly and started crying "aaliya shh shh pls pls I sorry mein yaha he hu pls pls "Amd pls wiped tears off and started laughing loudly Amd aaliya started hitting him ... And then she hugged him but realised zain wasn't there it was dream zain
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Had really disappered she shouted" zain zain "and cried she asked ppl around that had they seen zain she still thought zain was hiding Somewhere "zain pls mere paas aap pls pls I am sorry pls "aalIya shouted very loudly .. Ppl looked at helpless aaliya "yaha see bahut logone suicide kiya hai tumhare pati ne Bhi shayad yaha se sucide kiya ho " said aa local lady "nahi "shouted aaliya broke down and fell on the ground . too be continued ..
to be continued ... do comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@katmaan... ur inbox is full that's why I had to send u a scrap. please check ur scrap section.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
It was awesome plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awesome just awesome ff...👏
why didnt u continue?
it was so amazing...
pls continue...
would love to read it...
and pm me when u do...
pls dont make zain die... i am sure u wnt do tht..😭
because heros never die...😆
pls continue...
thanks...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Its awesome i loved it please please continue soon pleasee...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Wow awsm story
Loved it
Very nicely written
Please do continue it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
When will youuu continue this ff??? Cant w8 to read next chap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Hie...its an amazing ff
Pls continue soon
N do pm me also :)
Dnt kill zain pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Hey
Please continue this soon
I love it
I will be waiting
Please pm me when u do aswel
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