zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 98

loved it especially the zain's line that

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you showered us with your updates
kids expressing their fear part was so nice.
i really adore them
zain getting hurt with jonathan's words, getting his kids for pool, trying to woo then and the reaction when he heard sarah call him daddy was all so nice.
thank you so much for pm

awsome update

haye yaar loved it seriously 2 months again oh noo 😭

Awesome update especially the end part.. Zain knows how to woo his girl.. It will be very difficult for Aaliya to resist his charm.. Loved all the zaya moments.. Very beautiful and romantic.. Ayaan and Barqat both are crazy & entertaining.. Loved their non-stop nok-jhokh.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 🤗

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Very nice waiting for d next part plz. Update soon

awesome writer u r👍🏼... really loved all ur chapters... waiting for ur next chap... i really want cv's to consider ur chapters for the next upcomming tracks of zaya... as per the current track is its really sad ... and all that aaliya is going thru... it really suits with ur chapters... ur chapters are really good... hope someday ur chapters will be put into characters... u r really awesome... loving it... really looking forward to read more chapters...plz continue❤️

Its outstanding update back to back..
But didn't accept aaliya to react like this on zain behavior.
I m not ready to spare him that easily. .
Sarah n sammy part was amazing as always. ..
Love jon character in the story. ..
Barqat n aayan was as always rocking. ..

Its ok dear ...
We can wait. ..
Keep rocking
Thanks alot for ur regular pm.

Just came across your story and read it in one go !!