zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 90

that ws awesome update!!!!!...nd very emotional too...loved sara nd sammy❤️...brilliantly written 👍🏼... i loved each & every bit of it❤️...waiting for d next update...

Omg u updated d nxt part too
Ty so much
Update was superb
U potrated d characters v.wel
Loved it ty so much for pm
Update d nxt part soon

Aww sarah & sammy thinks their daddy hates them :(((
Once they meet zain they will know how sweet their daddy is:)))))
Lovely update
Waiting for the next part

i will cry now u stopped ta the wrong place...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 please chotasa update dedooo na pleaseee...😃😃😃😃😃😳😳😳😳😳..wat a tist n the storyy😳😳😳👏👏👏

After like ages u updtd
Awesome updt dear
Loved ut

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Prt23
Another amzng updt that was
Loved it

Chapter 22 : Welcome back Lara!! 🤗 Missed you and your updates.. Awesome chapter.. Aaliya totally rocked it.. I'm so glad that she spoke her mind.. She has suffered a lot in the past and finally she let her anger and frustration out on him.. Felt lil bit bad for Zain too.. Winning Aaliya's trust is a tough challenge but I'm sure he will find a way.. Loved the update.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😃

Chapter 23 : Wonderful update <3.. I love Sarah and Sammy.. They are so adorable.. I really want to give them a tight hug.. Poor kids.. They think their daddy hates them :(.. Bechara Zain.. Now he has to make them believe that he doesn't hate them.. Liked the way you described those lil mishaps.. Sammy is a the cutest prankster :D.. It seems Savannah is already impressed by Zain.. Loved their conversation.. Very nicely written.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care :))

Originally posted by: ZayaFever

brilliantly written👏

cant wait for the next chapter😊