zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 77

Originally posted by: musicxolover

Nooo, please don't stop writing! :(

The way you shaped this story is really good...don't stop writing until you finish it. :P

Now I feel kinda bad for Zain, actually...but he does deserve it for putting Aaliya through hell like that. :/ And Aaliya...I love how strong she is! 👏

Impatient for the next update! :D

BTW, did you check out that song I mentioned in my previous comment?

Originally posted by: candy...

Omg😲 Aaliya at Zain's door.

Amazing👏

But that's not fair 😒 Bas ittu sa update.

Yeh to ab suspense ho gya😲 .Kal kya hoga.

Hehe!

👍🏼

Originally posted by: tanisha

Wow!

Thats all I can say.

I read all the 19 chapters in one go and I so want to keep reading it. I've got to say you are just amazing. Please update soon and please pm me when you update:D

Awesome as always!!!.,

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Kal wohi hoga jo manjurei lara hoga... 😉

Hi Lara tt not far to stop here n hand us on cliff... Not doing!!!!!!!!

I wonder what's going to happen in the next update, and wondering why Aaliya all of a sudden is at front of Zain's door.. 😕 I hope she doesn't apologize or anything or maybe her kids will want Mr. Stranger to apologize to their mother. 😉 But .. I think Aaliya is all by herself..? Hm.. New twists, loving your cliffhangers but they do shock me! 😲 Ayaan and Barqat scene was great too. 😊 Hope there will be loads of ZaYa moments tomorrow. 😳

Zain better think of a better way to introduce himself in front of Aaliya! 😆 Anyways, I was hoping if you could use some parts of what I say in your next update if your fine with it..? So thinking since Aaliya is at his door, she will diss him and lecture him not to come near her or her children and that they should get into a cute argument fighting for their kids. 😳 He should be saying how he atleast wants them to know him as their real father. I know it sounds lame but thought you could make something out of it. 😭

I know my long comments are boring you, so peace and lovely update! 😃

Thanks a lot! i knew sammy would come up with something of the sort! Awh! zain.. your own son... i pity you!

Amazing update, loved it😊

Love d update!!!!