zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 20

Fab update 👏👏
Chap 4 and 5th both were amazing...After reading 4th chap I somewhat felt that Zain loves Aaliya..but no he is a jerk..I Loved Aaliya..glad that she left her "so called" family..Zain and Asad deserve all this for treating aaliya like trash esp Zain..first I was feeling bad for Zain but no he freaking deserve all this..!!
I'm so happy with your updates..words cant explain what I felt after reading this chapter..Aaliya's letter was so heart touching...You're just b.r.i.l.l.i.a.n.t
Thanks for updating🤗 and do update soon 😳

Loved d update!!!

Dis chp is jus wow..wat a pov frm aaliya..best chp of dis ff till nw..god d aaliya who was a greek n nerd..nw she is a successfull person..much difficulty cm in frnt of him..bt she jus break all d walls n create a house fr herself!!
It was jus mindblowing!!
😉 😆

Its great Update dear. ..loved it..
Finally in vry much relief after seeing this smart aaliya..
I love her ...and as way I love her in that way I hate zain...
He was real looser...
Really want great effort frm asad n zainside..
And also want a great guy for aaliya...
U can also imagine how much I liked it. ..
Continue soon. .
Thanks alot for pm dea. ..
Keep rocking

You are making me hate Zain, whom I prefer to love, he is a jerk... Aaliya my heart cries for her... U chose a beautiful song to describe the situation, the language you used narrating Aaliya's devastated condition was so good... At last She collected herself what we wanted the most... Want to see Zain getting some punishment for his misdeed

I felt like crying for my poor Aaliya! 😭
Loved how Aaliya didn't decide to end her life because that would mean she's a loser especially from Asad & Zain. 👏
Zain was complete jerk in this story! I mean I love him, but I'm just very disappointed with his behavior towards my poor Aaliya! 😡
You know that saying, "What goes around, comes around." Yeah that would be a perfect example for a revenge story, don't know if this is but just guessing. 😳
Plus, I know Zain's broken her heart, but I do want them to get together afterwards in life, the future.
Also can't wait to see both Asad and Zain's faces as they read the note haha! Especially Zain's face! 😡 Gosh! I've never hated him so much in any stories, but now I can feel the raging burn inside of me. I still love him in other stories. 😉
Great work! Am glad you updated soonly cause I was dying to read thanks Lara! Love you! 😉

Thanks for the pm 😃

gosh i was waiting so desperatly for this part and it was totaly worth it u amazed me by how well uve written it ;) *clapping*
Continue soon i want to see Zain and Asad reaction and if by chance Aaliya was preggy wih a child now lol
Continue soon, waiting for it :D
Love, Laiba

awesome update

Tht was amzng prt..
I loved it