zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 11

nice story dear..

oh my goodnesss...ur update bowled me...superb devil...just thiking what u eat n drink to get these ideas please share the secret naaa i will not tell it to anyone..👏👏👏👏👏👏😳 biggest hug lagee rahoo devil...

OH MY GOSSH!!

Superb update!! Aaliya's pain is nicely portrayed.. She is quite headstrong.. I wonder what Zain and Asad did to her.. They are not in good terms with each other anymore.. Hope Aaliya will be back with a bang and make their life hell ;).. Waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :D

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Superb update!! Aaliya's pain is nicely portrayed.. She is quite headstrong.. I wonder what Zain and Asad did to her.. They are not in good terms with each other anymore.. Hope Aaliya will be back with a bang and make their life hell ;).. Waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :D

Originally posted by: naina927

main aa gyi deviluuu...

resu...

unresu

(You unresd... 😲... yeh sapna toh nahi hai... 🥱 pinch me😵 . No jokes... thnks a lot dear, your comments always makes me jump to cloud nine and I eagerly look forward to read them. )

main sorry nahi kahungi kyunki ye mera roz ka kaam hai...

im used to it n moreover u are used to it... so not a big deal... 😆 😆 😆

( Thnk god you didnt say sorry, nahito mere kaan pak jaate..😡 phewww... yes am used to ur charisma nanina ki bacchi and love u rei... ❤️ )

"koi fariyaad... " what a lovely song it is...!!!! one of my all time favourites... 😃 😃

( Hey... 😲 thts one of my favourits too, how can this be possible huh. Hum pichle jaanam kei premi ❤️ thei kya...😳 ☺️ jo humare pasand itne milte jhulte hai... )

i got the pm when u updated the first chapter... i wonder how is it possible that i didnt get the pm regarding the prologue... 😕

( But I thought.. I sent you the pm !! Yeh bhul mujhse kaise hogayi... ?? Paar sorry toh mai bhi nahi blolungi... hee hee... 🤣 )

anyways i read the prologue and the first chapter together... that even better...😃 😃 😃

(Yeh hui naa baat )

ohh my god zain... he is tooo rude to aliya... the flashback... arghhh i would have slapped zain, if i was aaliya... the very first time one person talks to you disrespectfully or insults you, you should take a step...😳 i am not one of those who tolerate such behaviour... main toh vaat lga deti hoon... 😉 😆 😆

( Same here dear. Kuch log mujhe " jualamukhi " bulate hai... earned it..😈 )

but in the present zain is worried for aaliya... ho gya hai usse pyaar... ❤️ nahi hona tha... lekin ho gya... ho gya zain ko aaliya se pyaar... 😉 😃 warna kaun kiske liye itna pareshaan hota hai... thats one good news... 😃 😃

( Hogaya hai tujhko toh pyaar sajna... ❤️❤️❤️

Lakh karle tuh inkaar sajna...

❤️❤️ ❤️ Hai yeh pyaar sajna... )

but where is aaliya now...???? 🤢

( Tht's the suspense naina.. where is aaliya ?? 🥺 )

then the first chapter... zain refused to marry aaliya and on the other hand aaliya loves zain... what an irony...!!! again the rude zain... god someone teach him some manners... he should know how to talk to a girl...

asad is aaliya's brother but still he is with zain. i know being part of such a group and all that happens in college but still... its not acceotable yaar... how can he see people bullying his sister and he keeps standing at a distance and watch the tamasha being created. shame on him literally... 😒

gauhar ki entry... OMG... 🤣 i imagined gauhar khan and laughed thinking how much the nishalians hate her... 😆 😆 😆 coming back to the story, ye bhi badi btameez hai by god and zain toh... masha allah... 😳

( Yeh... I still do remember all the gang fights in fb.. haa haa.. 😆😆 )

back to present, zain changed and aaliya changed him. usmaan not talking to zain and all... but i felt bad for suraiya... donno why... 😳 may be because she being a mother is helpless... she wants to see her afmily happy like before but she can do nothing in order to make things get back to normal...

THATS IT FOR NOW...

STILL HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER... 😊

(Next chappy parne kei baad koi res nahi.. sidha unres mangta hai... nahitoh...😈 karara jawab milega, maine raajniti film bohot baar dekhi hai ..😎)

Originally posted by: SunShine_A

Ahh A FF, I generally don't go for any other except OSs not coz I don't like reading I love reading but FF are most of the time left incometed and if I get attached to a story then I hate seejng it incompleted. Yep writers hv a life of own but I do feel a hold of certain responsibility of them towards readers when readers make it a point to always appreciate and motivate.

This really looks intersting but again I hope I won't be left disappointed and at cliffhanger... Continue soon

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow tht was brilliant updt..
Loved it..

So beautifully written..
Continue soon
thnks for the pm

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

It's amazing, keep writing and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

amazing update.why Zain always rude with Aliya?i feel bad for her.Aliya character isn't werid but realist one.between where is she?i really want to know.plz in next part update Aliya present part plz.update ASAP.