This has to be the longest ff in this forum. But since its advent till the latest chapter, the way you have kept the flow of the story and the readers' interest intact, here, take a bow... You are one hell of a writer..
I could understand Jon's dislike/hatred for Zain but he has proved not to be worthy of Aaliya by wishing bad for her life ; her kids.. So its better he takes an exit from her life..
I hope Aaliya doesn't end up misunderstanding Zain once again post Asad's re-entry in her life. Hope Aayan will clear all the bad air on time... But please I do not want either Zain or Aaliya to lose a great friend and a greater support by either of them misunderstanding Ayaan.
Zain has proved with his repentances and retributions that he is a changed man. His genuine love for his children and Aaliya has made him worthy of Aaliya once again.
But what is it with Asad??? He simply thinks that by gate crashing into Aaliya and her kids lives, he will right all the wrongs he had done to his baby sister??? Zain's shares of mistakes will never go away!! But does Asad think that by blaming Zain for everything his chunk of wrongdoings will vanish into thin air just like that???? Please make Aaliya give it to Asad more than she had given it to Zain.
I'm intrigued like never before as to how this story would unfold. I know the story is your baby and only you would be able to do absolute justice to it. So I shall just look forward to good chapters and a happy ending while I go back to reread the ff once more..
Regards,
Yasna
Edited by bashful_moon - 9 years ago
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