ZaYa *Immortal Feelings* Updated On Page 3 Chapter 2! - Page 3

Krushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thanks for the pm 😃

Amazing update!

You have written it beautifully especially Aliya's emotions

Feel bad for Aliya 😭

At least Fahad is nice to her!

I think Suraiya had planned the anklet and note to bring a rift between ZaYa 😡

Loved it!

Will be waiting for your next update!

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mridula

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Posted: 10 years ago

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awesome update.
feel bad for Aliya,Zain and Suraiya both are not happy with her.
now who sent her anklt.waiting for next part.

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Sweta...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Omg how sweet yet bitter was zain and Aliyah's confrontation she's kidding but he messes with her feelings and drops her to the floor like :O I was shell shocked he did that I felt like crying when she went to the bathroom and cried her heart out then composed her self went to the kitchen to have her hear broken again... Feel so bad her and now I'm intrigued what's this anklet business who's sent it?? Thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

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