Confetti Masks (ZaYa SS) - Page 2

your writing is really good. Please, do continue the story. ❤️

this was an amazing read! you write so well!

I can relate to having a long bout of writers block
It's very liberating to be able to write again.

This was a wonderful start to your Short Story and I hope we see an update soon!

First part was really interesting!

Loved it

THIS.
OHMYGOSH.

I am alrdy stalking it lol

Its WONDERFUL..
Please Please Continue.
Cant wait for Next Part
You are an Amazing Writer.

Originally posted by: vishruta

OMG!!!

it was just beautiful

really liked it

Zain was making Al-ya jealous!!!

absolutely fun times!!!!

HAHAHAHA...

lovely...

pls update soon...

would love to read more!!!!!

yesss jealousy just brings out so many emotions to the surface 😃

Originally posted by: dancedanceRR

This is one of the first beintehaa stories I've absolutely enjoyed! You write very well!

Keep up the good work!

thank you 😳 means a lot you know

Thank you SunShine_A, aashiqua 😊

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Awhhh now that was a good start loved the way zain made Aliyah feel jealous and even I was desperate for Aliyah to finish her mini confession to zain hahah lovely start :)

lol me too 😉 I wish she had..

Originally posted by: Jyo.

This was an amazing read! Love love LOVE the way you portray Zain and Aaliya's thought process and emotions. Absolutely stunning! Can't wait to read more. Please do PM me 😳 Also, welcome to the forum :)

Thank you for such a lovely welcome 😳 Oh, I am glad you liked it. Being unable to write can mess directly with the head ugh! 😕

Originally posted by: Neha07

Wow!! This is such a wonderfully beautiful story. How I hope something on these line is shown is the serial too.It would be such a treat to watch Zain trying to make his MKB jealous just to make her feeling for him to come to the fore!!!.Please continue wth this SS. Waiting eagerly for the next update and do PM me if you actually plan to send out PMs.😉

Agreed and Harshad will do a mind-blowing job. He is good and spontaneous and she rocks with him. Together, they can set the stage on fire 😉

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome concept.Zain making his MKB jealous,poor Aliya she was on fire with jealous.last part was romantic.he really love her.waiting for next part.

lol yeah, she was on fire alright 😆😆 thank you for liking it 😳

Originally posted by: MsfairyCindreLa

I loved it, ua an awesome writer

Originally posted by: betelgeuse

your writing is really good. Please, do continue the story. ❤️

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

this was an amazing read! you write so well!

looking forward to the next update 😳

😳 I try to write good. Sometimes it clicks, sometimes, it doesn't 😕

Originally posted by: -Yuks-

I can relate to having a long bout of writers block
It's very liberating to be able to write again.

This was a wonderful start to your Short Story and I hope we see an update soon!

I can sense that frustration in you. Not being able to write is annoying! 🤢 I seriously need to get back to it. I am already feeling like a dried lake lol 😕 hey thanks by the way 😊

Thank you Wahian4lyf, jazmeen, p.vibha

Originally posted by: hilly

THIS.
OHMYGOSH.

WAS.

TOO.

GOOD.

BRILLIANT INDEED.
[CAPS had to used, it was that awesome, lol]

&

LOL... what did Zain put her through. Poor Girl, ahaaha.
..
Loved it all.. the details, the imagery... I could literally imagine Zain's play of masked mischief's and Aali's expressions.
&
the end... Ah* totally faaab *giddy* I had been grinning from start to end.. and well, it ended it waay too soon.
Can't. wait.for the next update. bring in on ! :D

hehe thanks.. your comment kind rebuild a bit of that lost spirit 😳 and yay, I made you grin.. now, that made my day 👏

Originally posted by: jazmeen

I am alrdy stalking it lol

LOL 😆 I can relate to that 😛