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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: hilly

WOW.

Intense & I'm still trying to get around.. what's really wrong with Zain?
& at the end of it, glad he's pretty much back ... 'farak toh padta hai...'
They both care about each other, immensely.. consciously or unconsciously.
You've started with a BANG and I'm loving it! Superb job and I'm guessing next update, you'll bring out all that I'm wondering about.
The 1st update- Cutee... it's nice you've split in up into intervals and that way that plot has been sped up.. I like the use of months and events.

Keep up the Fab work on ZaYa :))



Thank you so muchhh! <33 Glad you like the split intervals and the use of months and events 😳 Farak padta hai, omggg, ipk days πŸ˜† Taking by your profile pic I guess you watched it too? Anyway, thanks again for the comment :)

Originally posted by: -Fatz-

Wow, that was fast! Oh god, you're writing style is brilliant! Absolutely loveee it! Awh, Fahad being the cutie that he is :') and of course Zain and Aliya's chemistry gets better and better!! The suspense though! So curious!

Anyways, loved it as usual!
Update soon <33



Hehe, fast indeed πŸ˜† Thank youuu! Glad you like the writing style. I feel like the suspense is going to fail omg 🀣 Anyway, I shall update on Monday! Or I might do it now, who knows. Thank you once again! :)


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Originally posted by: florine_20

Wow this is so beautifully written. The dialogues the emotions the way they care for each other and how Zain reacted knowing she is hurt.



Originally posted by: fijiana

Thanks for the pm. Really appreiate it. Nice update. I wonder what's wrong with zain too. Awww, he doesn't want to see aliyah hurt.

Looking forward to the next update to see what happens. Can't wait



Originally posted by: babydolll

omg please reveal what abdulla brothers hiding...

voth the update was great...

update soon

thnx fr d pm



Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN

Great update as usual 😳



Thanks a lot guys! Your comments mean a lot πŸ€—
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#53

Originally posted by: * Unnati *

I'm two days late, due to my overflowing inbox, but I couldn't have missed out on the update!

Lovely update Jyo! I liked how you've added a suspense element to Zain's being. Those few ZaYa moments & Aaliya getting hurt over his reaction, was a lovely read!
"Usse ye bolke ki wo meri kuch nahi lagti?" How I loved it when he gives this reaction!😳
Now what is Zain's problem ?πŸ˜† which is he being such a ..he better make it up well, for making Aaliya cry, bas! ☺️
will be waiting for ur next update! PM me! :D



All good Unnz, the fact that you are here is more than enough πŸ€— Glad you like the update. And akshcd, you pointed out my favourite like from the whole update, yayy! πŸ˜† You shall find out what Zain's problem is super soon. And yes, he will make it up to her. Can't wait to see your comment again :)

Originally posted by: -Spriha-

Wow...really lovely story..!!
Loved Zain's concern...wanna know what happened that he changed so much...still he cares for Aaliya... 😳







Thank you guys πŸ€—
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Chapter 3 - Ignoring You

He spots her sitting on the beach. Her feet are soaking in the water. She is looking at the sun setting in the horizon. She looks entrancing. He sprints towards her. The closer he gets, the brighter the tears on her face shine. He sits himself down next to her, letting his butt get wet by the damp sand. "Sorry!" That's all that he has to say.
"Main kuch nahi lagti tumhari Zain. Sorry mat bolo." Her voice is thick with tears.
"Aaliya, bhai ka wo matlab nahi tha. Maine hi mana kiya tha unhe batane ke liye."
"Koi farak nahi padta Zain. You don't have to explain it to me." She gets up and starts walking away. He is right behind her.
"Aaliya meri baat to suno! Aaliya!" He grabs her hand and spins her around, pulling her flush against him. "Main seriously sorry bol raha hoon."
"Mat bolo!" Her voice is flat, no emotions. Her eyes are cold.
"Nahi main bolunga!" If she is adamant, then so is he. "I will speak, okay Aaliya? If you wanted to know, then tumne mujhse kyun nahi poocha?" His voice is softer than it had been in their previous meetings.
"Because I didn't feel the need to, considering main tumhari kuch nahi lagti."
"Why do you keep fixating on that?" He asks.
"Kyunki yahi to sach hai na? Mujhe laga tha main tumhari dost hoon, tum mere saath sab kuch share karoge. Obviously I was wrong. Fahad bhai ne bhi confirm kar diya."
He let's go of her. She needs time to calm down. He walks away, frustrated. Everything is already messed up and this isn't helping. She watches him leave. Tears spring up on their own accord. She sits on the sand as the darkness of the night takes over her. She hates everything.
oOo
It has been two month since that very day. He has tried contacting her, has attended every get-together there was. But she hasn't spoken to him, not once. She conveniently ignores him.
They are all sitting in that same cafe, the one that gives you a perfect view of the beautiful coastline. Aaliya loves sitting here for hours and watching the waves crash on the shore. She doesn't like it today. He is sitting next to her and is trying to talk to her. She doesn't speak a word, just sips on her hot mocha.
Everybody notices the change in her. "Not today!" they all think. It's her 20th birthday. They are planning on surprising her, except it seems as if she herself doesn't remember what day it is today.
Her eyes focus on the massive fruitcake that the waiter puts in front of her. It reads Happy 20th Birthday Aaliya. She acts surprised, she passes them a flattering smile; she fakes it. Her facade is too good; nobody notices it, nobody but Zain, of course. She cuts the cake and feeds everyone a bite, even him, albeit reluctantly. They gift her the presents and she opens them one by one. They are all very nice.
She looks at Zain as he hands her a box. It is fairly heavy. "Open it!" he says. He wants to see her reaction.
It is the complete Blu-ray set of the TV show Friends. She gives it back to him. "Bohot mehenga hoga Zain. Main ye accept nahi kar sakti. Please wapis kar dena ise."
"Arre it doesn't matter ki kitna mehenga hai. I got this for you. I know ye tumhara favourite hai. Keep it!" he says as he pushes the box towards here.
"Nahi!"
"Arre! Stop being stubborn. Rakh lo!"
They continue arguing. Nafisa has had it with her sister's stupidity. "Aaliya!" She raises her voice. "Keep it!"
Her sister thinks of her as wrong. "This couldn't get any better!" she thinks sardonically. She picks up her keys, takes all of her gifts and walks out of the cafe. She texts Fahad to drop Nafisa home. She can't stand this anymore.
Zain's anger knows no bounds. He slams his hand against the table as he pushes the chair back to leave. "Thanks a lot bhai!" He speaks sarcastically and leaves.
Everyone is left baffled. What has Fahad done? He looks around the table and sighs. He owes them an explanation. Five minutes later, they are all cursing him. He is in the wrong. They have realised and come to the conclusion... Aaliya and Zain are going to ignore each other.
oOo


Alright, here's chapter 3! Let me know your thoughts :) Once again, a massive as thank you for all the appreciation and comments. It means SO much to me! Lots of love for you all! πŸ€—
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Updated 😳
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Jyo! πŸ€— Finally read this and I just want to ask you one thing, how do you write so beautifully? I COMPLETELY LOVE THIS,LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Maachis ki theeli and Kit-kit together are so much fun. The first part was way too cute, and that's why I loved it to the core. 😳
Now comes the second part ; I felt bad for Aaliya here, poor soul. She is way too excited to talk to hum but he is not in a mood at all. I seriously wonder what has happened to Zain? I can't wait you to disclose this mystery! And then this " Kyunki .. tum Zain ki kuch nahi lagti " made me tear up. I can actually understand what Aaliya was going through while Fahad bhai said that. Later, Zain saying Fahad bhai that she cares for him, she's great of him and all, made me have a wide smile on my face just like Fahad bhai.

Overall, I LOVED THIS and you know that too! :D She misses him and he cannot see her hurt. Do come up with the third part soon. 😳
Edited by bezubaan. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my my! You are planning for an update? Eeeks! :D RESERVED
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OMG ITS UP!!
RES! πŸ€—
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so i wrote an entire paragraph and accidently pressed the backwards key...
welll f you technology ! 😑

rewriting cause i Love you...😳

so yea before i get into your update...the following line had me...

"He sits himself down next to her, letting his butt get wet by the damp sand."

the visuals man, the visuals! i gotta say Zain Abdullah (read harshad) has a pretty sexy booty! ☺️

anyhow the world war 3 continues! so Aaliya and Zain like πŸ˜†

by now i'm so in love with your writing i can totally nikkah it if it was a man...but its not and that makes me sad! :'( nevertheless this chapter was sooo sooo good!

lol Fahad the party Popper...the home wrecker! well not really but dude is he absurd at times or wat! obviously he doesn't mean any harm but that's alright i still hate his abrupt outbrust look wat has happened to my cutie putooties now!

Anyhow i'm loving how its time for aaliya to ignore Zain Abdullah - the father of all badasses!

i like it...very much...πŸ˜ƒ

and the grabbing hand and pulling her wala scene was like the tadka factor of the update...sahhh hawttt! Hoter than the tro-o-opics! wat m i saying!

anyways loved the update...3 down more to gooo...i is excited!😳
Edited by -Ammie- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
its awesome :))
love zain-aaliya :)
thanks for the PM
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Zain is trying to convince her.but our miss aliya has to be stubborn na. Its her right instead. All this while she was the one running behind u and now u have to make it to her Zain
beautifully written. Nice update
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