Realisations - ZaYa SS || Ch10 (Last) - Page 40 - Page 5

Wow, that was fast! Oh god, you're writing style is brilliant! Absolutely loveee it! Awh, Fahad being the cutie that he is :') and of course Zain and Aliya's chemistry gets better and better!! The suspense though! So curious!

Anyways, loved it as usual!
Update soon <33

Wow this is so beautifully written. The dialogues the emotions the way they care for each other and how Zain reacted knowing she is hurt.

Thanks for the pm. Really appreiate it. Nice update. I wonder what's wrong with zain too. Awww, he doesn't want to see aliyah hurt.

Looking forward to the next update to see what happens. Can't wait

omg please reveal what abdulla brothers hiding...

I'm two days late, due to my overflowing inbox, but I couldn't have missed out on the update!

Wow...really lovely story..!!
Loved Zain's concern...wanna know what happened that he changed so much...still he cares for Aaliya... 😳

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

YAYA...res for comment 😉😆

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I swear this just gets better and better!

so intense man! how do you write so f'ing well!

it broke my heart everytime Zain was mean to her...and my heart broke further when i realised that he was also suffering along with her...my poor babies...i know they'll sort it out...😳

but all this care and concern that they're hiding from each other only point towards one thing...pyaar ishq aur mohabbat 😆

This was such a beautiful update...i wish i could read on and on and on!

Zain comes across as mysterious (in a sexy way) at times...specially when he's speeding through the streets and hiding his emotions...i like that 😆

but OMG he finds her adorable?! Hells yes! can you hear my shipper heart waiting desperately for the next update?? cause you betta be hearin'' it

lol, lastly i love how you chuck in some real funny dialouges in there...for instance the raita phela diya one...🤣 so Zain like! i love it!

update soon okay babe? the wait is killing me...not my fault...its just that you have penned it down so well i can't helppp ittt! <3

Hello ji! 😆 Thank you so much. LOL, their ishq aur mohobbat is long way dear frand 🤣 And of course I can hear your shipper heart yaar. I can hear mine too, hehe. I personally think Zain's character isn't the one to just talk seriously. He has to have at least some ridiculously stupid/funny dialogues, so I put it in :) Update is on Monday. So so so glad you like it. Thanks again :D

Originally posted by: vinu127

Oh god jyo... this was such an AAAMAZINGGG update...

believe me or not-my eyes r wet... this was just superb!!!

esp zain's reactions !!!!!!.. i fell in love with Zain all over again now yaar... this was killer... pls update soon... i wanna read the next part before i die due to excitement...

Thank you Vinu :) Awww, this makes me happy that it did touch your heart <3 I shall be updating on Monday. Thanks again.

Originally posted by: vishruta

OMG

Zain is back

& with a bang!!!!

loved it

very curious about what happened to him...

revealations please!!!

loved it

pls continue soon

Thank you! Wait for the next few updates to find out what happens. Thanks for dropping by :)

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Wow lovely story!!

Loved both the updates :)))

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Amazing

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome update.Zain understand Aliya emotion and her care for him.he can't see her hurt.thanks for pm.waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: ZaYaVeeBa

lovely update poor aaliya ia hurt and zain us going to console her like it do PM me next yomeee.

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

its awsome
loved it
great work 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ZainXAliya

OMG! Please do PM me in the future updates, I am loving this story so much!

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
Continue soon
Thanks for pm.

Thank you everyone 🤗

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Part two was even more twisted that part 1 what's happened to zain? Loved the way he took her home and he smiled but as soon as she turned to see the smile had gone and when she calls Fahd to know what happened and he's like your no one and zains mad at Fahd for saying that and runs to find her well drives and he's sooo happy she cares awhhh so cute can't wait for the next part :) thansk for the pm :)

Thank you for the long and detailed comment Sweta :) Glad you like it. Thanks for highlighting the scenes you like 😳

Originally posted by: .MeriAashiqui.

omfg how do you write so wel?? damn its like i am freaking watching a serial or sumthing! really awsome jyo! really love it <33 keep it up cant wait 2 read the next chapter seriouslyyy and yaaay zain's back lol and aliya omg! cant wait dooo update soon, and thank you soo much for the pm love, ieeep ur such amzing man, ily keeep writing😎 x.

Thanks Ashi 🤗 So glad you like it :D I shall update on Monday, Aussie time. So wait till then 😆 Ily tooo <33

Originally posted by: .Kiran.

Jyo you already updated second part:O I wanna read this and leave a comment but then Im forcing myself to study for Stats. Final is on Saturday. SO...I'll probably unres next week or if I can't control the urge to read this, then I might just read it today itself and comment!😆

Awww bub. That's okay. Keep studying and comment as and when you get free from studies okay? Good luckkk! Ily <3

Originally posted by: moregaon

its good

Originally posted by: zillionaire

continue soon.. very cute..:)

Originally posted by: pinki123

wow amazing ss !

really love it please continue soon!😉

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

very interesting story ^^, keep it up nd cntinue soon:)

Love, Laibu

Thank you everyone 😳